5 barz
ur spittin first

u know da drill

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im fine with the 5 barz, the spittin first is a lil wack, jus put a timelimit of 15 after both check in so both startin spittin at the same time, holla back if yo interested...

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No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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wat do u mean if i am intrested, i set it up so dats means ur spitin first, spit cuz...we already agreed to diz shit

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Roop this forum aint no bitch bar stop givin other Male spitters passes
Lyrically theres a reason my spits givin both yo "Lips" Gashes
Your reppin Kilos n wit my pounds im jus hear to rep "Masses"
Name aint roop its CHHHEA cus yo fear is sproutin yo "Lips" Mustaches
Dishin out rashes as yo jus spittin out gasses its reality jus call it Trips Magic
Pussy ass nigga yo momma keeps tellin you stop "Wussin wo dads Wycycle"
Maybe you could stop spittin baby if you didnt suck yo dads Knob like n Icicle
as a dog yo a cub you don blow when fisher price hands you "Mics-to-Blow"
You rollin all hard i was surprised you didnt ride in on yo 4 wheel Bicycle
Shit i forgot bitches n pussy only rep ridin Handicap "Tandem-Tricycles"

Holla back, peace..

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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Lil trip, sound clusmy to me, before reading ur verse i knew it was goin to be f'd up already
damn u were tipsy dats why they call u trip cuz ur flow is unsteady/1

Must call u lil for a reason to show dat 1-6 record, o my lord
I’d give up now and hope to be ignored…/2

Seems to me, everytime u go into a battle u figure out a way to spit a shitter verse
Keep getting worse, I’ll merk u, n throw u in a hearse/3

Quit rap, here ur choices with ur expertise, joinin da remake 98 degrees, workin at Mickey D’s, or doin takeout at some Chinese…Wait maybe u cant even work at these/4

Even if u think of something clever, however its ur ugly ass face that will stop u from goin to any place
in any case seems look like u startin ur own messed up race, u look like a monkey humpin a vase/5

aight votes plz

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yo dis battle wuz ight roop had good structure but overall he wuz dismantled by trip so therefore my vote goes 2 trip

vote=trip

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aiite i wanna close this shit up, so need some votes holla back...uppin

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Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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damn this a hard descision, trip you had better flow to it, but roop had better punches and i think punches are what win a battle he straight went with the low blow showing your record...

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roop aight verse. not alot of hard hittin punches, but ok structure.Lil-trip nice verse, aight punches, and personals. u get my vote because i thought you came harder than roop. roop step up your lyrical wordplay.return the fava:lyricalmethod vs.$ik

vote=lil-trip

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Polls dropped back down to zero thats odd it was 2-1...? well whatever uppin back up peace

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Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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Aight battle. I wasn't really feelin Lil-trip's verse. Actually, I didn't really get his verse at all. I felt he had some good punches, but roop's verse was constant hitting. Flow I would have to give to Lil-trip, but vocab I'd have to give to roop. Both of you mixed it up and I thought dis was a tuff battle.

Vote=roop

Keep elevating!

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And I mean with your right hand, cause you ain't got no girl to give you some.~

Roop this forum aint no bitch bar stop givin other Male spitters passes
- Bein a homo fag givin males passes
Lyrically theres a reason my spits givin both yo "Lips" Gashes
- Lips Upstairs n downstairs referrin he has pussy lips
Your reppin Kilos n wit my pounds im jus hear to rep "Masses"
- Hes a lightweight im hear to rep masses
Name aint roop its CHHHEA cus yo fear is sproutin yo "Lips" Mustaches
- Back to the pussy his fear like the chea pet when wit water is sproutin hair (Mustaches lol)
Dishin out rashes as yo jus spittin out gasses its reality jus call it Trips Magic
- dishin out beatin he dishin gasses (gas from ass is basically shit) shootin magic
Pussy ass nigga yo momma keeps tellin you stop "Wussin wo dads Wycycle"
- callin him a baby n talkin like one so instead of usin slurrin his words wussin wycle
Maybe you could stop spittin baby if you didnt suck yo dads Knob like n Icicle
- conencts to the top verse slurin cus hes suckin like n icicle
as a dog yo a cub you don blow when fisher price hands you "Mics-to-Blow"
- im a dogg hes a cub (smaller dog) fisher price hands Mics same as MCs to blow
You rollin all hard i was surprised you didnt ride in on yo 4 wheel Bicycle
- 4 wheel bicycle what babies ride in on
Shit i forgot bitches n pussy only rep ridin Handicap "Tandem-Tricycles"
- bitches referrin to his homo status earlier on handicap tandem (together_ tricycles in 3 lol)

theres yo broken down explanation illest, feel it peace..

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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams.

Tupac Shakur

No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year...

Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it...

- Lil Trip

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Both verse were aight...nxt time trip..get rid of the ( " )...but anyway..they both had the structure & the flows...but the punches go to TriP...his punches were harder...

vote = TriP

Aiight trip ya had some good punches, personnals need werk tho. Ya had structure and flow on lock
Roop ya had ok punches. No personnals worth menchin'. Get rid of the numbers. THe chinese line was WEAK. Munkey humpin a vase. WAC_TARDED

Vote-Trip

Drop a vote on my battle-In mah sig

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roop........y0ou need to not space out your bars liek that because it tkaes away from your flow and makes it look choppy at t imes.........your punches was good i thought that they hit harder then trip's so that is why i gave it to you

trip........your punches was to basic for me i didnt really feel them and your structure i dind treally like aswell......you could reword your shit and then you should be fine.....keep elevating

v/roop

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