i spit first 8-12 lines
both verses due by 11:59 tonite
no crew, hate or d/r votes
good luck

young newz, u kno u cant spit wit a vet like e-dubz
try and u gon get merked like a bitch in clubz
leave u bleedin like a girl scout pussy after she meet r. kelly
leave yo intestines flowin out yo momma belly
u cant touch me, dont even try u gon b left wit 6 in yo chest
while yo baby momma askin fo my dick cuz she kno it da best
like when da pregnancy test come back positive afta fuckin me
u gon see she cheatin u gon hafta b beatin cuz she leavin, she see
how u aint a real man cuz u b pleadin fo her to cum back when u bleedin
afta i smack u in da back wit ma mack leave u fallen like t-pac when he fleedin

You niggas know the deal
never ran never will
being scarred is just another felling I aint never feel
On the dot trained to kill.
You gotta keep squizzing till the clip drops out
cause if you dont kill a nigga he'll point you out (you bitch)
so when you see me nigga see me in the streets
any day weapons drawn homie we can get it on
when I spray and you gone and your family starts to mourn
and your homie on the block pumping R Kellys song "I Wish"
I aint have to move yay on the strip
but something grey on my hip


Holla at cha boy

lets get some votes on dis battle holla

e dubz gotz this v. He gotz better vocabulary in his, i like his style all together, and his punchlines were more powerful, if u know wut im sayn, now could u return the favor? http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127734
Im out peace

young news i like that rhyme rite there merked him reall good put ur rhymes together tight, edubz go battle some chump but not young newz
Holla at ya boy young Crip nigga

uppin...

Young Elevate a lot b.... cuz yeah no comment

but i guess tha other boi dub took this wit waat he put up there i think those were punches and i think that was a flow but w.e he did got tha job done be easy

v/e dub

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aiyo both of these niggaz is wack but no beef tho...yeah i got to give some negative props to e-dubz for dissin PAC...dont do dat nigga. and i liked da R Kelly i wish line young news dat was tight so you get my vote

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Hey e got this battle but young keep workin at it
v/ e dub

Yo people u need to elavte niggaz alot na mein das was need to elavate
but
E-Dubz
got away
nd when yall niggaz VoteCAn u Accualy Read The Verse


Flow--E-dub
Rhymez --e-dub
Structure--e-dub
Humer--Young News --- After Lookin at his Versse

V/E-Dubz

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Free Agent

uppin to finish dis holla

uppin...

lets get some mo votes in here holla

Young Elevate a lot b.... cuz yeah no comment

but i guess tha other boi dub took this wit waat he put up there i think those were punches and i think that was a flow but w.e he did got tha job done be easy

v/e dub

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