the sun comes quick jus to pay a visit//
the moon takes its place showin the sun's existence//
it glows from a distance, reflectin light to the earth//
lookin down on the world, giving the night birth//
gravity keeps the days revolvin, thas basic physics//
sun and moon both different, and fight to cause eclispes//
the moon moving in two circular paths, the sun stays centered//
times of days, snow and rain; summer, fall, spring, and winter//
these planets aligned, they're keepin time//
showin subtle signs that may affect the mind//
hangin sky high, like a fingernail pointin down on you//
the sun cries rays twice a month until the moon is blue//

nice..but all ur topics are the same...explor diif topics...coz to be a good rapper u need to be able to write dopem lyrics on all diff topics...coz all ur topics are based around the same kinda thing..dunt get mewrong dis is ok..but...

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