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Old 06-05-04, 12:49 PM   #1
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DON vs L.I.

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Rules will be.......

10 Lines
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No hate
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Due Tonight

Goodluck man...
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Old 06-05-04, 01:35 PM   #2
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Old 06-05-04, 02:03 PM   #3
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chekin in.........................................
 
Old 06-05-04, 11:51 PM   #4
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Trying a new style...


Tried to give advice but not one person was convinced…
Rhymes so old…
They were used back when Burger King was prince…
Hesitate on the callout and admitted u had a loss to expect
This guy is so stupid…
Had him thinking Sherlock Holmes (homes) was a housing project…
Godfather? You got a better chance of getting DP nude see
Cant come close to a true emcee…
So go ahead and run along back to your herb newbies
Record looks nice but all your opponents are unknown…
How stupid can he be…
Kid needs all he can get but he killed one of his own…get it?
Lines couldn’t get down and dirty if you trained em wit a pig…
You’re my bitch…
That’s why you gotta go around reppin my name in your sig…
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Old 06-05-04, 11:56 PM   #5
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aight here it is i gota type fast

L.I. a hard white kid born in delaware thinks he know the meanin of poverty...
hes a oxymoron like a smokin gun in the hand of ghandi...
when he says hes from newark hes talkin bout Delaware not jersey...
we'll nickname you the new Gateway arch cause your sexualitys curvy...
you have girls that are just friends so you dont qualify as pimp...
li the first two letters stand for what id give him; a L.I.mp...
if you wana see fear stare at his pic cause thats him personified...
a collaboration wit me is the only way your music is L.argely I.dentified...
you hide behind the skill of your crew metaphorical techniques...
if you want a true metaphor heres one;L.I. is weak...

aight my first elevated battle gainst a vet so leave some advice pc
 
Old 06-06-04, 12:28 AM   #6
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i wiould have to give this to L.I. but the fact about li's verse was that his stucture was a little messed up but other then that he still had better punches and his flow was more on.....sorry don gunna have to give this one to LI

flow-LI
closer-LI
opener-LI
punches-LI
structure-Don
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Old 06-06-04, 12:33 AM   #7
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^ WTF

ight check it l.i way 2 may links in this shit i bet people had about 100million pop ups fom clickin them shits but um your opener was pretty nice good meta an decent punch your closer lmao ahh shit clowned em wit that rest of ya verse was there vocab lacked punchs was about average but ya kept personals comin which is always good

don ya opener..... decent set up line was lame punch was creative an your closer wack u basically gave props to his crew an the punch was weak notreally anything in that an the rest of your verse was wasted punchs cause of wack set up lines but ya vocab was good

if you wana see fear stare at his pic cause thats him personified...
a collaboration wit me is the only way your music is L.argely I.dentified...

^ only good shit u had to me but u had plenty of personals just need to work on setin up ya punchs better an keep em consistent not a bad drop though just elvate on that u got potential but dont think u won this battle

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Old 06-06-04, 12:35 AM   #8
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thanks for the votes and feedback....uppin for tonight...im out....peace.....
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Old 06-06-04, 01:41 AM   #9
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uppin for soem more votes aight thanks for the feedback pc
 
Old 06-06-04, 10:21 AM   #10
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Old 06-06-04, 11:07 AM   #11
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punches with wit li:Tried to give advice but not one person was convinced…
Rhymes so old…
They were used back when Burger King was prince…

personals li:Godfather? You got a better chance of getting DP nude see…
Cant come close to a true emcee…
So go ahead and run along back to your herb newbies…

structure both: bars wasnt as stretched

flow li:Lines couldn’t get down and dirty if you trained em wit a pig…
You’re my bitch…
That’s why you gotta go around reppin my name in your sig…

overall i gotta go with li

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Old 06-06-04, 03:59 PM   #12
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uppin.............................................
 
Old 06-06-04, 04:21 PM   #13
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Old 06-06-04, 09:59 PM   #14
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Old 06-08-04, 01:33 PM   #15
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