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Old 06-05-04, 01:56 PM   #1
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-C-Explicit vs. Outsider

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Alright Here We Go

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10 - 30 Lines
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No Dickriding Votes
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding (You Feed You Lose)
I SPIT FIRST
YOU MUST CHECK IN BEFORE I DROP
YOU DUCK THE BATTLE AFTER CHECK IN YOU LOSE AND I GET CREDITED A WIN
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Can you give me some imput on this battle...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128298

Could you also drop a vote on its


Thanks
 
Old 06-05-04, 02:15 PM   #2
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checking in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-05-04, 02:18 PM   #3
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Check skis....... alright so now if you duck this im awarded the win automatically...

My verse is due in an hour...
Yours is due 30 mins after mine.....

Gives me 1 hour
Gives you an Hour and a half...

Peace and good luck
 
Old 06-05-04, 02:50 PM   #4
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Yo you have a crew that no ones heard of // (Shady Life)
Fuck this homo thug, like DMX im showin NO LOVE //
Bitch sayin he can merk me, you cudn’t merk barney if he was an emcee //
you’re the definition of WACKNESS, quit now and give me win three //
Bitch needs to pre-write, fuck it ill give him the whole night //
He cudn’t write anything hot compared to the rhymes I ignite //
Yo like Staind you’re an outsider lookin in //
Up on AIM askin yo dickriders to take it on the chin //
Too bad those bitches are getting ready to blow me //
You couln’t win even if I gave you 4 votes homie //

SWITCH IT UP FOR THIS CHUMP

Yo imma leave you tongue tied like two lesbians kissing //
Yo your rhymes aren’t seen, like yo body.. there missing //
Go back to pre-school cause your lyrics are elementary //
You lack skill especially when your punches are complementary //
Congratulations you think you won this battle but it’s your imagination//
You cant step to my determination, that’s like stepping to annihilation //
Yo you stink, you need help rappin so heres a link //
This cats a thug… yea right that’s why he listens to n’sync //
Yo being a fuckin fake ass thug is not rewardin’ //
The only shells u bust is when ya scamble eggs in the mornin’ //

Bitch....
 
Old 06-05-04, 03:50 PM   #5
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Aight its been more then 30 mins since i spit, and its been an hour n a half since i checked in.. (His Time Limit)

soooo im thinkin a DQ considerin he had more then enough time to spit 10 - 30 lines...

I spit my shit in like half my time limit....
 
Old 06-05-04, 04:07 PM   #6
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yo this bitch is nothing compare to me, your a waste of space you should agree/
give me the key switch you off like an ignition, and leave you dead wid no controvose/
see i can rhyme fool, it's like a power tool, jacking up your ass makin u mental/
my rhyming skills got you climbing hills, smash your teeth in leavin wid flase teeth/
sqwash your brains on da floor, reverse hand break turn in my car, leavin to get eat/
this guy can't think up lyrics if dey were reflecting in the mirror, i feed to u like dinner/
you wasn't ment to be, leave the lyrics on ya sette, my lyrics are twistin doin spinners/
those punches were lackin, and i think dey were PRE WRITTEN, just bin bitten/
dis noob, lost his mind and, now im leavin ur ass blind, no simpathy for a titt-head/
the games practically over, this bitch drives a fuckin NOVA, vehical car, like a retard/
what a spasticated underestemated the most hated mc in dis world so far/
givein no mercy for faggy mcs, thats why i like to tease explict for bein such a clit/
i rap you out like takin you outta da frame, like a fuckin train, takin the tip of the tit/
away you rap on jokes, but der bein out spoken, thats why i backfire leavin u chokin/
never experienced violence, i'll leave you distressed and overdose u when ur doping/
it's like talking to a deaf person, sign language wouldn't even give you an effect/
see i even draw a picture, and you still give me a lecture, ur mind can't even detect/
talkin about my imganiation, you couldn't measure a fraction, and ur an't an attraction/
in looks you idiot, even though your a midget heh, ur penis is smaller den a digit/
another things he's scared of kissing, gets da piss taken cuz he's a fridgid/
to scared to bone a girl, if you did you couldn't even find the hole/
dis dumbass is so dumb if i told him to meet wid a girl he'd go to the north pole/
next time i'll see you, prepare your gonna get your head flushed down a lou/
wid ya mummas biggest shit, that you've ever sin in your life, n gona make dat true/
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Old 06-05-04, 04:10 PM   #7
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Way to show up wayy past your time limit... good job prewriting.. you can tell by the stretched lines...
 
Old 06-05-04, 04:11 PM   #8
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I can't vote yet, but C-Explicit murdered it no doubt...and in less time. His flows were consistent, and hit hard. Keep on.
 
Old 06-05-04, 04:26 PM   #9
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good luck wid your shitty lyrics and your links bitch. You had no multies lol, your verse sucked.
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Old 06-05-04, 04:47 PM   #10
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lmmfao at how outsider is gonna run his mouth after that verse......

structure was just terrible...and consistent...hence consistently terrible,every single line in there was waaaaaaaay too long....umm personals win battles and c-explicit obviously killed u in dat category....u had a line sayin somethin like "i think they were pre-written" thats just bad,u cant diss someone by sayin u think they did somethin thats not good....

vote-explicit for harder hittin punches and a structure that was much easier to read and made it flow a lot better

i will poll when i get enough posts
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Old 06-05-04, 04:50 PM   #11
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good battle mut c got thiz hiz punches hit harder and flow waz betta outsider ya verse waz ok punches were played out neither of u really use multies
so c got thiz by way of punches
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Old 06-05-04, 04:53 PM   #12
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structure was just terrible...and consistent...hence consistently terrible,every single line in there was waaaaaaaay too long....umm personals win battles and c-explicit obviously killed u in dat category....u had a line sayin somethin like "i think they were pre-written" thats just bad,u cant diss someone by sayin u think they did somethin thats not good....

vote-explicit for harder hittin punches and a structure that was much easier to read and made it flow a lot better
^^^^Agree Same Exact Thing!

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Old 06-05-04, 05:02 PM   #13
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yo this battle was even close. outsiders rhymes were soft and he had terrible rhyme scheme. c-ex had a pretty good verse and had mor personals and better rhymes. some good wordplay too.
vote- c-ex
 
Old 06-05-04, 05:25 PM   #14
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Outsider your verse sucked....Your punches and your rhymes wern't even good , and they didnt even hit hard....And you really didnt even have any personals...plus your lines were long too...C-ex your verse was good enough to win this battle...your punches were good and they hit harder....and i thought you had more personals too...so overall you get my vote for better verse and punches...well really you took this whole battle....

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Old 06-05-04, 05:58 PM   #15
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This Battle Was KNown Done i think the Battle Explain's it all for its self


C-Explcit Rip this KAT No MAtter What Any Body Says

Break DOwn

C-Explicit

Flow 7/10
Rhymes7/10
Punches 6/10-
Structure 6/10
26/40

Outside
Flow 3/10
Rhymes 0/10
Punches 3/10
Structure 4/10
10/40
ELAVATE

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