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06-08-04, 12:35 PM
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Dope.
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No Need To Hide
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No Need To Hide
did this at Rb original so brining it hear aswell.In the stillness I hear your voice calling, Inwardly hiding why you are falling. You are saying my name, but I can not reach you, Hearing those unspoken words, so sad, so blue, Hoping we will never split, stick together like glue. Dont be scared, there is no need to hide, Step out of the darkness, swallow your pride, Come from the darkness into the light, Your with me now everything is alright. I feel there is something in you hurting, For I too have experienced that burning, Forever standing still watching the world turning. I yearn to share those burdens you carry, You hide those feelings, ones you hope to bury. My love, when you need an ear I am here to listen, When you need uplifting I will make you glisten. My arms are here for which to hold, For even the strong are not always bold, I will always help you out even when we are old. A promise to you are all these things, You have helped me take-off --- given me wings, Whenever you are happy, up there an Angel sings. During times of trials and desperation, You have carmed me down with inspiration. Give me a chance to help you through, The chance I would give a friend like you. Let me help you as you have helped me, Our love is more than money so it comes at no fee, No cost, no money, it all comes for free.
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06-08-04, 12:53 PM
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Dope.
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bump this is a good pz.. should go to Rb awards its that good..!..
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06-09-04, 05:47 AM
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Dope.
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replys would be nice...
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06-09-04, 11:54 AM
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(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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lol this shyt was nice but u dont gotta gloat lol j.p nice drop keep it comin.................
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06-09-04, 11:55 AM
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RV AUDIOS BEST
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word rasccal another good pice from you word that was good as a bitch
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06-09-04, 11:56 AM
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*Hides* .. Aye Yo .. Can I Come Out Now!
 lol......Safe Piece' ....!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-09-04, 07:08 PM
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Dope.
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IP:
bump for more feedback...
nobody want to nominate for Open Mic of the month? its dope pz.
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06-09-04, 10:08 PM
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I liked this piece a lot and i gave me chills because it relates to how i feel with my gurl. I think you should continue to read and write raps to expand your vocab which will make ur visuals more visual. I have no doubt that you will and I really liked this piece. You struck a cord with my brain. Keep it up.
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06-10-04, 07:38 PM
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Dope.
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IP:
thanx man glad you liked.. save it if you want
bump it up pz. |
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