Yo check it,play da game simple cus its gon get harder,da more u spit these lines u gon go farther,,cus I see niggaz on da block who don't take nothin easy,I can't leave now cus da fonies still need me,come on dogg I aink givin u tips for nothin,I already told only Bitch niggaz start frontin,listen up carefully cus I'm only goin to say it now,um got da black chicks goin wow and da white chicks goin holy cow,cus um tryin to help u so listen to what I say,before u grow old and wonder why ya gay,cus um tryin to help niggaz come out good,so u could know what um sayin an do what u should,be a playa around ya hood,and have da rep as Mr.Big Wood!!

ok that paragraph isnt gonna work that is horrible stricher make lines not paragraph most of your shit is plain and it is gangsta but nothin really stands out about his piece so sorry this was wack

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yea the flow is horrible overall wack needs major elevation someone call the hip-hop doctor to nurse this battle to some health...lol j.p but u need to elevate iight good luck..

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