yo 5-13 lines max
all the vote shit non of that
u spit first
aight good luck dawg~1~

aight check it

You wanna battle me/
Im a noob with lyrics that will shake and haunt u in ur dreams/
u have no idea what i could do to you in reality/
rip off ur arms while ur screaming for dear life/
shut up, you wanna battle against the cannibal who needs anger management/
cause if i get to violent in my lyrics i just might show up on ur door step and handle em/
Look verbal violence u dont stand a chance/
u take this shit like 8-mile, when that shits fake man/
look this is the real shit this is where u earn respect and deal with it/

im bout to stomp on u like the hulk//
im the verbal warfare that will make u choke//
rip u blind folded u need to provoke//
kid ur takin it as 8-mile u must be cheddas bobs hoe//
kid ya line was weak ur better of rappin in a old folks home//
have him spittin blood cuz i stick and cut//
its the real world kid im the reality//
finish u off with a mortal kombat fatality//

aight need yalls vote on this aight and be honest on ya votes aight holla bak~1~

OK GUYS IT WAS A DECENT BATTLE ILL GIVE U THAT MUCH PRETTY FAIR AND BALANCED SO...

FLOW...VERBAL WITH RHYMES
PUNCHLINES... BOTH NEEDED IMPROVMENT
CREATIVITY BOTH WERE ORGINAL WHICH IS GOOD

BUT THIS ONE GOES TO VERBAL BECAUSE OF THIS ONE LINE
its the real world kid im the reality//
finish u off with a mortal kombat fatality

i VOTED ON YOURS DID U
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129210

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115870

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Vote=Verbal Violence

The battle wasn't that great.Neither had really good rhyming going on,so need to work on that.Close battle,but you gotta choose a winner so.Hit my battle \/

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uppin for more votes.......................................... holla bal~1~

uppin this so it can be closed already!!.................... aight ~1~

both came weak and Verbal's Flow and punches and verse was over all better so i gotta give it to him wtf was the canibal_lyrics never heard of u never ever want to again after that go home u can't even beat vinman or Rush shit ok so gotta give it to Verball

V/Verbal Violence

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uppin for more votes on dis shit right here!!!!!!!!!!!~1~

v/verbal for not making me thro my computer out tha window


can ya get back at me and drop a vote on this battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=129258

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my vote goes to verbal violence for a few reasons he had a decent structure for a newb and his punches were thought out like the 8 mile one cause most newbs jus write in thie rnotebook and use it to battle anybody u 2 need to get some personals and all aight jus elevate

v/verbal
return the favor vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129340