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Old 06-12-04, 09:05 PM   #1
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J-kwon Diss

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Yo give me some feed back about this.

Here comes the 1 2 the 3 to the 4
A carry a gat that will knock down your door
I heard you slept with that man whore
huh whats that you want more

I can hear your squeaky voice a mile away
Ill fix that when ill bring out the AK
Why don't you be true and rap about yourself being gay

Why are you saying drink
jus wait a minute and think
bc thats like snitchin' on yourself
thank jermain bc he made you wealthy
wait until i bring out the nine and leave u unhealthy

Chorus: EEEERRRR body in this bitch gettin shot
yeah the guns gettin hot
J-kwon stop trin to be somethin your not
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Old 06-12-04, 09:31 PM   #2
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pretty sweet you should actually make the verses longer and make 3 then post it,itd be sweet
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Old 06-13-04, 12:35 AM   #3
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That was pretty good yeah finish it off with 2 more verses and make the first one a little longer. Other than that it was nice.. lol I like the chorus.
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Old 06-13-04, 12:38 AM   #4
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doggy...get up from ur chair...go in ur room...look in the mirror...turn on ur tv...watch tipsy...and think about the pointlessness on this thread...u wasted ur time
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Old 06-13-04, 02:56 AM   #5
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^^^ No.. that songs whack... yet... suprisingly.. this diss was whacker.... weird...
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Old 06-13-04, 12:00 PM   #6
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about as bad as jkwon... if not worse...
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Old 06-13-04, 12:26 PM   #7
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Lol@ This Wackness
Damn.
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Old 06-13-04, 01:15 PM   #8
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I swear 2 pac was dead. . . . ? . . .
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Old 06-13-04, 06:06 PM   #9
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bad bad bad bad and more bad the man doin what he gotta do to survive if he got skills or not he makin money so leave him alone dont get madd jus because u suk and he is rich...
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Old 06-13-04, 07:32 PM   #10
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NO!!!!!!!!!!! what has happened to cats these days who make a remake
of a song that is wack and make it much wacker? fuckin' stupid shit here
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Old 06-14-04, 01:42 AM   #11
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That Looked as scarey ass i dont even wanna mention it was whakc look Heilum what he should do is get out his chair go to his mom and ask for a fuckin hit wit a belt then come over here ill call Mike Tyson to But RApe u playing a roll as Tanky. Gay Jail.man then he punches the shit out u when ur done cause this was the worst diss on anybody i choulda said 2 lines better then this come on be for real 1
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Old 06-14-04, 01:51 AM   #12
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wack!!!!!!!wack!!!!!!w ack!!!!!!wack!!!!!!!that Was Jus Plain Wack!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-14-04, 10:36 AM   #13
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Dat Nigga Has No Life Just Go Read My Diss Called Don't Hate
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