I'll fuck up yo' senses like a histamine/
When I'm done, you be nothin but ancient history/
Raise yo' lines like you think it's actually shit to me/
When I'm done, all you raisin' is just a fist to me/ ( )
I can get people pissed at me/
The who, when, where, and why is still a mystery/
I enrage MCs just with the clatter of a couple keys/
You can wrap up yo' jimmy and you still can't fuck wit me/
I can make myself into somethin', Gs/
And I ain't talkin about a walkin' target for disgruntled Cee's/
To prematurely end myself is not what I truly believe/
I got the rest of my life to go places, ya see?/
It ain't my fault if you become a casulty/
Rap is war, motherfucker. I don't take it casually/
Bombs will fly everywhere, explodin' this scene/
And check who's droppin' em. Primus17/

I do what I can. What y'all think?

Nope
& how the fuck can you freestyle in TEXT?!"?"

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Not quite legendary yet....

yea im wit soul on dis keep elevatin and realise there is no text freestyle....

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Well, at least no one sayin' this sucks a fat nut...

lol/\ it is called a keystyle and you got to ber one of the smatest people i know

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Damn, I get the point. How many more people gonna tell me it's Keystyle and not Freestyle...

Just one more

ITS A KEYSTYLE NOT A FREESTYLE!!!

OK i'm done. The rhyme was OK i suppose

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u cant say its to bad for a first, but u still far, keep elivate'n, n you'll get better.