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Old 06-13-04, 08:55 PM   #1
DirtBoy69
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shadow vs. j-poll

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deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 06-14-04, 03:11 AM   #2
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check
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Old 06-14-04, 12:25 PM   #3
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checkitycheck check....good luck j-poll
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Old 06-16-04, 10:30 PM   #4
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19-4 huh... a mix of just dickriding, begging and pure luck.......
just like his avatar.. fuck j-poll that fucking dickriding fuck......*
j-poll claimes-of-fame but brings shame to the rap-game....
melody unchained? change it and put lame under- ya-name.....**
j-polls "utterly wack"we all knew that since the introduction......
his wack-ass- antics .. are the "blueprint" for his destruction....***
he fake like micheal jackson..and 2 b a real rapper is his goal…
give it up j—nobody wants to hear from “weak-aka-j-poll”…
got a nice record in his posession.. but looks can decieve…..
him being a good rapper..is like an atheist screaming”I believe”….****


for people that dont understand
* look at his avatar obviously
**look under his name melody unchained
*** his crew is blue print hahaha
**** athiest's dont believe in god..
quick ten minute spit what ever my comp is messed up so no links lol
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Old 06-17-04, 02:09 AM   #5
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^^^^BITER^^^^
the last line...it was fucking used against native(chrit)

i shouldn't even have to battle this cheater...do you want me to waste my time finding the verse???...get a mod in here...
PLAYED punches...you might as well have copied them from king solo's battle last week you fuckin herb...


anyways i guess i'll post a verse eventhough this bitch cheated!!!

here it is...

Did anyone see his verse?, he cheats, the no spine fag...
This kid bites on his last bar and the rest was from king solo's mag...
On inspection this kids deflectin his cheating detection...
But it's just like all the other herbs biters a $upreme ressurection...
Fuck another kid ridin shadow's edge dick, even copied his name...
Tried to confuse people so maybe he'd get some of s.e's fame...
But kids trash he's never been seen in the elevated picture...
You actin tough?, when last week you were like'can i have some help mister?'
I MEAN FUCK!!! even his sig tells us he's part of the past,
He's claiming it and he won't change so how will he Ever-Last...
Just like a real shadow he holds about as much weight as Ally Mcbeal...
Already merk'd, so get off my site or i'll turn off the light and end you for-real...


WELCOME TO THE WALL OF SHAME...where are the mods...
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Old 06-17-04, 12:22 PM   #6
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dude i never heard that line before in my life i made up shit bymyself.... i win automatially... quit cryin alright... i dotn even know who the fuck native is...
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Old 06-17-04, 12:36 PM   #7
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Its not most original lines im sure it wasnt intentional
 
Old 06-17-04, 03:50 PM   #8
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Votes Votes Votes......................
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Old 06-17-04, 05:43 PM   #9
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It's not bitten, because he used it differently.
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Old 06-17-04, 08:27 PM   #10
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hey, shadows edge quite ridin dick so obvious and fuckin change your titel, u fuckin bitin jus like yo bitch.
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Old 06-17-04, 08:52 PM   #11
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it's different just keep battling i'll be back with a vote in a bit
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Old 06-17-04, 09:26 PM   #12
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breakdown for shadow:

flow:seemed kinda choppy not really workin to be 5/10

volcab:basic array nothing complex 5/10

punches:a couple of alright personal type shit fav line even though he changed his avitar and it doesn't really apply now,"just like his avatar.. fuck j-poll that fucking dickriding fuck......*" overall not too bad 6.5/10

overall:16.5/30 kinda plain and average

breakdown for j-poll:

flow:some nice internal rhyming threw most of it good job 7/10

volcab:a notch above shadow good job 6.5/10

punches:harsh stuff nothing really quotable but you had to of made this kid cry this is the lryical equal to stealing a baby's candy then punches the baby in the head to shut it up. 7/10

overall:20.5/30 good job

vote--j-poll
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
 
Old 06-18-04, 04:52 AM   #13
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uppin for more votes...
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Old 06-18-04, 12:21 PM   #14
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u didnt spit in time man fuck.. i win automatically that was a noshow
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Old 06-18-04, 02:27 PM   #15
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yes i did you idiot...we had until thursday night at 12...and i posted yesterday at 2 in the afternoon...so how's that late you fucking idiot......fuckin kid...haha your pathetic...uppin for some votes people
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