aight
due tonight
10-14 linez max
no d/r, crew or hate votez
peace an g/l

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

he bites his names from movies... so u know that hes all fake
... the one wouldn't be hard.... if he was on bodies by jake
hes a no-name.... hell be made famous as a lost to urs truely
........and ill have him seeing star like on the set of a movie
u wont go far..... and the role u play in this battle is co-star
and u only pretent ur hard..... like faggot porn stars
u dont write lines u bite mines.... and dig into my mind
..... and have u out cold..... like hes stuck in the alpine
these newbs give me headaches.... and with all my scolding
.....i cant seem to make him understand... not to use bolding
jesus all u use is fancy symbols trying to make his punches hit harder
...... and u saw ronald regan die.... do u want to be jimmy carter?
to let u know...... the s in sdizzle.... well it stands for scott
and the ones on a c-trip.... cuzs hes been riding on my cock

aight, i'm ready, letz do thiz

Y u kallin urself sdizzle, u ain't even a nizzle
Or a nigga, who r da best, no doubt, fo shizzle
I mean sure, u wanna be a blak boy
But wait, i kan't be judgemental, i'm a white toy
Who likez to release his mind through rhymez
Aw..dissin u....man those were the easy timez
They were easier then pullin big crimez, too easy
Or actin in a soap, which r sooo fukin cheesey
I saw ur "pretty challenged" naw ur just tryin
To be sum1 else, don't be sum1 else, ur lyin
To urself, on the inside, that meanz u weak
A future in thiz path iz lookin really bleak
Be u an no1 else, let go of the rap "threadz" be u an no1 else, u dum fuck
If thatz u, fine, but itz not ur look, like rappin, get sum help, beatin me!...u need luck

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

the one
Y u kallin urself sdizzle, u ain't even a nizzle
Or a nigga, who r da best, no doubt, fo shizzle
1/10 fuck ya racial shit white black dont give a shit
I mean sure, u wanna be a blak boy
But wait, i kan't be judgemental, i'm a white toy
2/10
Who likez to release his mind through rhymez
Aw..dissin u....man those were the easy timez
1/10 weak ass punch
They were easier then pullin big crimez, too easy
Or actin in a soap, which r sooo fukin cheesey
1/10 who u throwin punches at??
I saw ur "pretty challenged" naw ur just tryin
To be sum1 else, don't be sum1 else, ur lyin
2/10 weak punch
To urself, on the inside, that meanz u weak
A future in thiz path iz lookin really bleak
6/10 sounded better then the rest
Be u an no1 else, let go of the rap "threadz" be u an no1 else, u dum fuck
If thatz u, fine, but itz not ur look, like rappin, get sum help, beatin me!...u need luck
4/10 alright ender

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SDIZZLE
he bites his names from movies... so u know that hes all fake
... the one wouldn't be hard.... if he was on bodies by jake
6/10 nice opener and punch
hes a no-name.... hell be made famous as a lost to urs truely
........and ill have him seeing star like on the set of a movie
5/10 nice methaphor
u wont go far..... and the role u play in this battle is co-star
and u only pretent ur hard..... like faggot porn stars
6/10 lol i like your disses you a pimp
u dont write lines u bite mines.... and dig into my mind
..... and have u out cold..... like hes stuck in the alpine
4/10 alirhgt shit
these newbs give me headaches.... and with all my scolding
.....i cant seem to make him understand... not to use bolding
1/10 weak line
jesus all u use is fancy symbols trying to make his punches hit harder
...... and u saw ronald regan die.... do u want to be jimmy carter?
3/10 alright shit
to let u know...... the s in sdizzle.... well it stands for scott
and the ones on a c-trip.... cuzs hes been riding on my cock
3/10 weak ending

ONE-17/50
Sdizzle-28/50

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not hatin on you one i know you got better shit then you just dropped i gave ya an honest vote return the fav

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131129

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u dont write lines u bite mines.... and dig into my mind

if thatz true ur mind iz pretty weak, but anyway letz get sum votez on thiz battle ppl!!

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

give me my win..... upping for 5votes

yeah. u wish man, i tried to go easy, so i went wid ur "pretty challenged" bullshit

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

so ya, i'm gonna stop wid thiz bitch, an letz get me sum winnin votez ova here!

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

cmon ppl, we want sum votez on thiz battle, cmon letz get sum

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Leav feedbak on ma battlez an don't even think i kare bout winz maw fuka! : An' don't think i care bout ma record etha

Vote- Sdizzle, Flow was tighter,
"ill have him seeing star like on the set of a movie"
Nice Line,
TheOne, Your Rhymes were just childish and amateur,
Need To work on your flow too.
Not Beefing, Just Givin My Opinion, Peace

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SKForty7 2004 Red Eye Crew

Leave An Honest Opinion On This Battle When CS Has Posted His Verse
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129891

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SKForty7 2004 Red Eye Crew

upping..... skforty ill hit up yours a little later

good punches are how battles are won and i didnt see any in TheOne's verse... gotta work on that man.. nice verse sdizzlei saw some punches in there that got at him pretty good you get my vote

upping