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Cannibal_Lyricis 1 16.67%
Poison 5 83.33%
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Old 06-15-04, 04:07 AM   #1
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Cool Poison v. Cannibal_Lyricis

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min.10 lines 20 lines max
no crew or hate votes
no unexplained votes
ill spit first
you got 25 minutes to drop afta i spit
lets go
 
Old 06-15-04, 04:29 AM   #2
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ez

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listen

Ayo somebody call tha paramedics im bout to beat this dude
you can call me tha real cannibal cuz im bout to eat this dude//

tha best thing bout cha rhymes is when ya endin tha shit
ill paralyze wit you wit mah lines an have you beginnin to twitch//

im hotta than tha devil, im bout to burn ya ass off
so count down from 10 an watch mah level blast off//

nasty like rats, an mah rhymes got mo power than ten cities
cats stay lookin at mah lines like a bitch wit big titties//

im clowin dis dude you can call me real silly
this cat faker than dem dudes called milli vanilli//

jus by exceptin this battle, this dude was done
he aint even a betta artist than tha chinese dude "william hung"//

im on a different page, you still on tha table of contents
fa eva elevatin is mah lyrical content//

ill put burnt dog faeces in ya mouth bitch
an ya still couldn spit out hot shit//

get betta dawg, thats wut tha bottom line is
go practice while ya mom swallowin my kids//

its ova.
 
Old 06-15-04, 04:38 AM   #3
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dont be a no show even tho it wont matta, you would lost any way
 
Old 06-15-04, 06:28 AM   #4
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yo

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my electric went out but ill spit it fo you










ight bitch you wanna battle me
ill kick your ass like bruce lee
then we'll see whos the motha fuckin pussy

i know, you got a tear in yo eye
but fo pussy ass bitches like you,its okay to cry
you talk shit,but you shut your mouth when i pass by
youll win,hah thats a lie
ill live till all tha pussy ass bitches like you die
so when you battle,please try

try and strive to survive
but trust me motha fucka you aint stayin alive
theres no use in listening to you rap
we already know your shit gonna be crap
yea i may be late
but i had to give yo pussy ass time to meditate


you poision, well im tha cure
since that tear in yo eye make your vision a blur
but you'll have to make sure
biach next time you better answer to me as yes sir

poison you aint tight
you aint nothin but a spider bite
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Old 06-15-04, 06:32 AM   #5
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outta 10 verses you rhymed 5 times,and usually you just repeated the same word
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Old 06-15-04, 02:48 PM   #6
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my whole rap rhymed bitch, i merked you, an ya whole rap belong in tha toilet cuz it was straight shit, bitch.

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Old 06-15-04, 02:49 PM   #7
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an i guess you aint heard of metaphors.
 
Old 06-15-04, 02:51 PM   #8
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To Cannibal My Vote Gos To U Poison That Was A Weak Ass Rap Keep Tryin Tho--------peace
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Old 06-15-04, 04:00 PM   #9
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Vote=Poison

He ripped ol' dude up 4 real.^I don't know what that dude talking bout.Poison punches were way harder than that other dude talking bout.
Let's compare intro lines:

Cannibal:


ight bitch you wanna battle me
ill kick your ass like bruce lee
then we'll see whos the motha fuckin pussy
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Poison:

Ayo somebody call tha paramedics im bout to beat this dude
you can call me tha real cannibal cuz im bout to eat this dude//

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Poison came harder.End of story.
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Old 06-15-04, 04:01 PM   #10
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I forgot to add it was

Make sure ya hit my battles up
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Old 06-15-04, 04:35 PM   #11
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ok

poison took this easily
ok structure..dont space your bars...keep them all together
ok wordplay
good flow
good personals
ok punches
overall good

cannibal:
wack
your lines were elementary
you could do better personals..bad personals
bad punches and ok glow

overall..poison gets this

can u vote iin this battle..
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Old 06-15-04, 04:55 PM   #12
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ya Poison came funny and hard
milli vanilli reference iz played but the big tittie line wuz pretty funny

not yo best one I read Poison but.....

Cannibal you have to elevate some. your verse didn't have bite and then what was worse is it didn't even make me smile until I was done reading it.

Keep workin
dis shit is fun

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Old 06-15-04, 11:17 PM   #13
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need mo vote come on people
 
Old 06-16-04, 02:28 AM   #14
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need more votes cmon people
 
Old 06-16-04, 05:38 AM   #15
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vote on this please
 
 


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