aight 10-20 lines
no cheating
no d/r
no hate
no crew
no feeding
aight verses due by tomoro night
good luck pc

aiight checkin in and droppin my lil keystyle....

comin out swingin...wont even give ya pen a chance to leak
"Rule" ya jaw(Ja Rule) make it drop when I "murder" ya "ink"(Murder Inc.)
thinkin he Italian...son been watchin to much "Sopranos"
Ill have this cats teeth lookin like missin keys to ancient pianos
Hittin Don till hes "punch-drunk" like an alcoholic
Makin no sense (cents) like walkin around wit an empty wallet
Man you just artificial...no street in you...you not real
My lines kill...even you admitted that yours just fill
havin the balls to call yaself a godfather
yet he only 15...this bitch aint nuthin but my godaughter
And after this battle...I have ya whole whack crew bowin
laughin as i dismember this fake italian

black theif your just a bastard, the product of monogamy...
talk about fake you even keystyled your own biography ...
and your avatar is the only time your name is associated wit a mic...
your verses suck so bad...i wish chapelle would "wrap it up" and say sike*...
your open mic wasnt bad, specially the title "had to get them"...
but the rhymes sucked...cause your boy big kountry wouldnt have bit them...
black theif those words describe you like a synonym...
talkin to streetsweepa is the closest hood your livin in...
your records 13-15 and most the opponents were new...
jus stop fakin son...the tits in divinities sig are realer than you...

*in the show there was a segment bout the wrap it up box u had to see it to understand wen chapelle said sike
aight enough said that was good lets get some votes

hmm i think Don took this..he had a lil bit better personals..black yours was aiight but i felt like your shit was a lil bit played..that cents line was played and that jarule murder ink line is mad played..but your shit was aiight..i felt your punches hit pretty hard but not ur personals...u both had good structure but Don you ahd the better punches n personals....ur shit was aiight..you edged this by personals mayn..good ish

vote: Don

rtf http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130194

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yo streetz u need to have 5 or more wins to vote on elevated but thanks for ur feedback though

Uppin for votes...and leave links to your battles as well

uppin leave a link to ur battle and ill return the favor aight pc

uppin............................................. ..

iight...lemme do this by category
opener:thief....even though it didnt rhyme
closer:don
punches:thief
flow:tie
personals:don
vote:thief...he had overall better punches and more complex verse, he was consistent wit his rhymes on most lines, so he had the better overall drop
vote - thief

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aight half his verse was fillers but it dont matter still uppin this one

some of your lines were fillers also fam....lol....anyways no problem Uppin

uppin lets get some real votes my entire verse was nutin but personals and punches all made for u urs had nutin but prewrittens that u could use for anybody and weak played out personals fam...lol...no problem...uppin haha

pre-written?lol...ok whatever fam....anyways 1-0....uppin this bitch

uppin no hate here i jus said somethin cause u did

don....i vote honestly, i jus felt he won.

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