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5 | 71.43% |
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06-18-04, 03:13 PM
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deadly when confronted
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::.Red Dot vs. Limited Edition.::
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alright you know the rules we already decided... house rules.. 10-15 lines due in an hour of checkin
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06-18-04, 03:14 PM
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ok this is my check in
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06-18-04, 03:21 PM
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A'ight...checkity check in-check mo fucka...haha jp...
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06-18-04, 03:48 PM
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IP:
A'yo...check it...
All's you can see...is tha 'red dot' aimed at ya heart Murder 1st degree...a breath of ma skill blows yours apart Steppin' up to tha best...You gon' be 9-3...haven' u heard? You can't beat 'better'...and the better wasonly an herb Why did I decide before...to let you back in tha dopest crew? Why do you try? Against tha 'Master'...wat can 'Hopeless' do? You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'... You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin' Learn to take shit seriously...your destined to be in a circus... Take tips from these battles... ...but then you still could not be able to merk shit... |
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06-18-04, 03:28 PM
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deadly when confronted
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IP:
alright L.E your the leader of a wack crew ill intentionz
while im dropping hot shit getting honorable mentionz you think you hot while your just candian bacon you call yourself a topical head but you just fakin keying up typing your verse but your hands is shakin you so nervous u know red dot is droppin a hot freestyle while you molestin ten year old boys you pedophile little bitch your touching boys in their private parts saying "i will give you candy" like sweet tarts.... (molesters offer candy to kids) alright you didnt know reddot would rip ya.. right? fuck yourself you got a dick and a pussy... *hermaphrodite (have two sex organs) alright so im gonna end this battle saying you a sick fuck soo next time you wanna battle let me wish you good luck
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06-18-04, 03:29 PM
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IP:
man my verse was wack.. but hopefully it will get the job done... g'luck limited
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06-18-04, 03:52 PM
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IP:
good verse limited... hahah my battle versus blimp thats funny.. i didnt even try hahahaha but its cool... this should be a good battle.
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06-18-04, 03:53 PM
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Yeah, good luck...I was spittin half assed this battle too...
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06-18-04, 04:21 PM
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IP:
ok red dot won this but here the breakdown:
Opener: i guess reddot06's was better but it was bad for both. um both just jumped in. flow: not gonna say who was better cause it was equal big up to both on this Style: same as the flow very nice to both Complexity: red you had bigger words and longer sentences punches:red i didn't get some of um but they were better than Limited's personnal: red that double sex line very nice limited had um oh yeah nothing really closer:red you wished him good luck so i guess that counts. Best line: basically everything red said tips for both: red nothing much just do what you do Limited quit the hype link shit and .... in the middle of the ryhme. update your words
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06-18-04, 04:58 PM
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Checckity Checck Checck
Reddot: alright L.E your the leader of a wack crew ill intentionz while im dropping hot shit getting honorable mentionz ^Nice Diss On His Crew & An Alright Opener... 9/10 you think you hot while your just candian bacon you call yourself a topical head but you just fakin keying up typing your verse but your hands is shakin ^Aight Personal.... Lackin On The Punch Though!!!.. Kiid 5/10 !! you so nervous u know red dot is droppin a hot freestyle while you molestin ten year old boys you pedophile ^Played Out Lines' ... Kiidd... 2/10 Aint Feelin It!!! little bitch your touching boys in their private parts saying "i will give you candy" like sweet tarts.... (molesters offer candy to kids) ^O...k... That Was Weakkkk...!! Most Deff.. 0/10 alright you didnt know reddot would rip ya.. right? fuck yourself you got a dick and a pussy... *hermaphrodite (have two sex organs) ^Nice Punch' .. Playa...!! 6/10 alright so im gonna end this battle saying you a sick fuck soo next time you wanna battle let me wish you good luck ^Weak Closer' ..!! Tragic..!!! 3/10 Reddot!!! 25/60 Checckity Checck Checck Limited Edition: All's you can see...is tha 'red dot' aimed at ya heart Murder 1st degree...a breath of ma skill blows yours apart ^Alright Opener..!! Boi I Know You Can Do Betta' .. Why Did You Go So E'z!! 7/10 Steppin' up to tha best...You gon' be 9-3...haven' u heard? You can't beat 'better'...and the better wasonly an herb ^Weak Punch....!! Baby' lol Sorry To Tell It To Ya... 4/10 Why did I decide before...to let you back in tha dopest crew? Why do you try? Against tha 'Master'...wat can 'Hopeless' do? ^Aight Punch..... 7/10..!!! You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'... You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin' ^Heated !! I Like That Bar' Probably Your Best Line In Your Verse' ... 9/10 Learn to take shit seriously...your destined to be in a circus... Take tips from these battles... ...but then you still could not be able to merk shit... ^Nice Closer' ..!!!!! I Was Feelin It..!!!!! 9/10 Limited Edition 36/50 Vote: Limited Edition!! ...!! For The Fact That Reddot Fell Off In His Verse At The End... Or Else He Would Have Got Thiz' ..!!!!
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06-21-04, 09:15 PM
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REDDOT'S DROP:
alright L.E your the leader of a wack crew ill intentionz while im dropping hot shit getting honorable mentionz WEAK SELF GLORIFICATION NOT NEED 5.5/10 you think you hot while your just candian bacon you call yourself a topical head but you just fakin keying up typing your verse but your hands is shakin NOT A GOOD PUNCH NOT FEELING 5/10 you so nervous u know red dot is droppin a hot freestyle while you molestin ten year old boys you pedophile WOW DO YOU HAVE PROOF IF NOT....NO PERSONAL 6/10 little bitch your touching boys in their private parts saying "i will give you candy" like sweet tarts.... WEAK WEAK WEAK 5/10 alright you didnt know reddot would rip ya.. right? fuck yourself you got a dick and a pussy... *hermaphrodite DECENT BEST PUNCH YET 7/10 alright so im gonna end this battle saying you a sick fuck soo next time you wanna battle let me wish you good luck WEAK CLOSER TO FINISH 5.5/10 OVERALL: 5.6/10///56% LE'S DROP: All's you can see...is tha 'red dot' aimed at ya heart Murder 1st degree...a breath of ma skill blows yours apart GOOD OPENER 7/10 Steppin' up to tha best...You gon' be 9-3...haven' u heard? You can't beat 'better'...and the better wasonly an herb THAT WAS AIGHT NOTHING SPECIAL THO 6.5/10 Why did I decide before...to let you back in tha dopest crew? Why do you try? Against tha 'Master'...wat can 'Hopeless' do? WEAK ARE YOU EVEN TRYING??????6/10 You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'... You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin' OKAY PUNCH NOT THE GREATEST 6.5/10 Learn to take shit seriously...your destined to be in a circus... Take tips from these battles... ...but then you still could not be able to merk shit... AIGHT NOT A GOOD CLOSER BUT IT'LL DO FINE 6/10 OVERALL:7/10///70% VOTE GOES TO: Limited Edition
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06-18-04, 06:52 PM
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The Truth
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Red that was sad Fake Personals 1 line missen full bars...Up ur vocab and stay on flow,,,no self Glorification..5/10
LE...Wasnt really fellin that but u had some punch trys and personals were ok..Vocab could be better.Ur flow seemed to stay on besides that..6.23/10 Vote-LE
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06-18-04, 07:00 PM
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deadly when confronted
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IP:
how do i need to up my vocab using words like pedophile and hermaphrodite i think those are pretty big words....
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06-21-04, 02:11 PM
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A'ight uppin this shit.........3 slept on battles fuckin sucks......
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06-21-04, 02:57 PM
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Flyweight
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red dot:
comment- overall GARBAGE... punches:5/10 personals:3/10 creativity:4/10 vocab:5/10 score:17/40 suggestions:2moro's gaol, "must rhyme".... next- flow is key, use it next time structure- didnt even score that, cause there was none... personals- give us some dirt on your opponent, you expect to beat him with a freestyle? Limited Edition: comment- not bad, semi weak for being in elevated front lines... punches:7/10 personals:6/10 creativity:4/10 vocab:5/10 score:22/40 suggestions: kinda weak, but it damn sure stepped on "8th Disciple representitive"... you could work more on punches, if they would have hit harder, you would have KO'ed somebody, my vote: Limited Edition return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130233 ... ~Fem~ From BP, holla at em |
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