this took just 5 mins to write...
pretty shit but i was reading sum his posts
i thought he might have somthin straight away.
but anyway...

yo'... you aint the moderater of shit bitch
i'll moderate yo ass some.. then put you in a ditch
who the fuck... do you think you are
comin up here like ya the... queen of hoo haa
"who do i ask to be a moderater" dont ask ya earn
first lesson... this fool dont learn
and then you wanna go up against me
mutha fucker i got lyrical technique
illunatic...i salute you with a moon ya prick
across the room... on my spoon ya flicked

just tryin to work on punches and shit...

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lol getin the rust off

ok first of all this hoe i will pimp,
have c.m.f.s.....
..walkin the ave, bitch swagger, and a mean limp,
he tried to come personal i shrug this bitch off,
hell be queit...
...sayin any thing esle with a *cough*,
he came ok for a newb with strait losses,
cant take the heat in the kitchen...
...so he in the closet with salads he tosses,
yeah i know i am comin week i got to get the rust off some,
by why come hard when...
...his name backwards is S.lurpin F.uckin M.ale C.um.

Illunitic takes this hands down... You got bad ass punches and personals.

yeah i know i am comin week i got to get the rust off some,
by why come hard when...
...his name backwards is S.lurpin F.uckin M.ale C.um.

Very nice, talkin' about his name backwards, I like it!

C.M.F.S: You need to elevate more. Work on your structure, it'll help you. Work on your vocabulary and punches.

Vote: Illunitic

I didn't like either of them

But Illunatic takes this. I agree with Tweeza when he said C needed to work on his structure. The lines were weak, brah, but I see potential.

And you, Ill. *puts on best Mama voice* I know you could do better. But the ending was nice and funny (which I like).

SHOW THE LOVE. VOTE ON MEH BATTLES.

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weak battle wuts up u guys? my vote goes to ill.....i need sum honest votes on my battle please...............

both horrible verses. both of you need to elevate.


v - cmfs, it was a toss up

both yall get da fuck off da site lol weak from both yall u should be ashamed.........lol
my vote goes to ill he came wit some punches well more than cmfs and thas what won it is da punches
v/ill