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Mental Anew 1 16.67%
SPuL 5 83.33%
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Old 06-23-04, 12:22 AM   #1
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Mental v.s SPuL (PUNCH LINE BATTLE)

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Old 06-23-04, 12:23 AM   #2
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Old 06-23-04, 12:31 AM   #3
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yea here goes:

You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow
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Old 06-23-04, 12:31 AM   #4
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http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_002.jpg

Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..

Lol if u dont get that then jeez
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Old 06-23-04, 12:49 AM   #5
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haha aight i liked this thing spul that was funny it was good. mental urs was good too but the only thing wrong with it is hes indian so that took off from the personal now if he was arab u woulda k.o'd him aight it was funny pc

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Old 06-23-04, 12:51 AM   #6
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Lol Indian bassicly is Arab.
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Old 06-23-04, 12:59 AM   #7
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LMFAO @ Indian is basically Arab. Anyways, I'm 75% black, and 25% Indian.
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Old 06-23-04, 01:05 AM   #8
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spul if i were u id embrace bein indian and use it like i do wit bein italian cause theres not many italian images in hiphop if theres any and theres not any indian i dont think in mainstream sorry for freepost jus had to say that
 
Old 06-23-04, 01:07 AM   #9
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^weerd. Yea, I do.
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Old 06-23-04, 01:20 AM   #10
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here is the over sized breack down for this battle

I think that spul had an over flow and great structure to his verse begining to end. I loved your opener and your closer was even beter...
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You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow

spul-
flow:9
structure:9
punches:7 only had one punch.... lol
personal:8 tight personal

over all 8.5ish

metal
I felt that your verse picked up towards the end...I think that your opener was not as good as your finsher...
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Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..

flow:9
structure:9
punches:7 only had one punch.... lol
personal:7 tight personal
overall-7 close but his verse was better than yours

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Old 06-23-04, 10:28 AM   #11
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Lol... are you serious?

Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow
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Old 06-23-04, 12:50 PM   #12
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Lol... are you serious?

Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow


Man, you must be dumb if you don't get that. And no that line ain't from birthday cards.
Also, that vote ain't explained. Uppin' for REAL votes.
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Old 06-23-04, 11:06 AM   #13
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^That fuckin line is from birthday cards and wack shit like that. Mentals line was poor aswell. But if I had to vote thru some sort of originality it would be him
 
Old 06-23-04, 01:01 PM   #14
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damn....how do i break this shit down.....1 bar

Spul-
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow
ha ha...that shits funny...nice punch

Punchline rating:7.5/10

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Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..
that shit would of hit hard and been funny...but he's indian.....still funny but off

punchline rating:7.0/10

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Old 06-25-04, 03:59 AM   #15
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Spul-
You go around callin' yourself "new", but lines, you always seem to borrow
Wanna kno how to keep an idiot in suspense? man, I'll tell you tommorow
Had me laughin man. Agreed that I have the feelin I heard it before, and not in a rap, but somewhere... Still - punch was full - punch at 1) his name, 2) borrowing lines, 3) calling dude a dumbass. All around good punch. 9/10

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Straight off the Boat Arabs Still Speakin Hebrew..
Once Deadly but back in The Taliban his Old Crew..
1) Arabs speak arabian, jews speak hebrew. 2) Spul ain't arab. 3) What does Taliban have to do with Blueprint? - Nothing... This was off... Its like using a weak kracka line on a nigga. It was weak in the first place, making it inaccurate, and even if Spul was arabian, jewish, OR in the taliban he would have beat you. 3/10 (woulda got zero, but your rhymescheme and structure were nice)

vote/ Spul
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