Cut your flow, bleedin rare blood type o, leavin ya depressed and cryin on an opra winfrey talk show like a homo//1
Since along time ago, you was the head CEO till i murdered your soul in a battle nation wide left status quo on HBO//2
you was furious, couldnt see or stand left dilerious on your flow talkin to Neil Armstrong about how he saw a UFO//3
but unlike a kasino, i dont fold, a good flow i hold and mold two ppl fold leavin ya spits dirty greenish gold//4
but al-though, in self defence i commenced to grab an orange snapple an shove it through your adams apple left dressed like a GI JOE in a funeral home//5
ur quick to reimburse your styll, when you stop n go then reverse ya stylle, i'll leave ya injurded like lil boys in green light red light sent to the student nurse//6
but im faster n too quick to disperse a reaction flow to this diverse boy who spit nothin but a shitty nonsense verse//7
So like the CIA i stopped dropped n locked away the key to this boys DNA//8
cuz all poured out on the 8th day, after my bacteria flows ate away his verse like meals in a lunchroom on a cafeteria trey//9
But I, take this Eigth n desecrate this boy leavin lucky if he was in a junior lightweight, becuz as i run byi leave ya meshed in Ty die havin askin for an MRI from third eye blind//10
cuz for you there aint no round 3, smashed with hardcore debris from my flows so hard like DDP do to MC T on wrestling channel twenty three//11
cuz my shits non plussed, laxatives couldnt even digust after i combust in your body shells//12
so after my battle collects dust and skin cells faster than AOL can upload motels, i'll never buckle under an eigthwunder so heres ur FAREWELL//13

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wacha'll think?

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pretty nice man

Nice but didn't like your structure tho, might work on that.Concept wasn't very special but who cares?Liked the way you used those different abbreviations, overall pretty good stuff

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Nebody else, ne oppinions or tips

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