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Old 06-26-04, 03:39 PM   #1
PoEtIc JuStIcE
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new here aint done this b4 jus bored...so im jus spittin sumert freestyle

as i sit back,birds sing and inspuire my life
every day,the despair like a twist of a knife
deep an hypnotic thought cause brain malfunction
aim high,to fall low..same old conclusion...
speak of past tense,mind state of supense
stop clocks like wristwatch,makes no sense
for the mind of a genius is straight ill spit
only losers fail to close lifes dreams to be sick
fire burns bight,intense to burning lights
peeps fight,but 4 what right?..to kill life
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Old 06-26-04, 04:08 PM   #2
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Originally Posted by PoEtIc JuStIcE
new here aint done this b4 jus bored...so im jus spittin sumert freestyle

as i sit back,birds sing and inspuire my life
every day,the despair like a twist of a knife
deep an hypnotic thought cause brain malfunction
aim high,to fall low..same old conclusion...
speak of past tense,mind state of supense
stop clocks like wristwatch,makes no sense
for the mind of a genius is straight ill spit
only losers fail to close lifes dreams to be sick
fire burns bight,intense to burning lights
peeps fight,but 4 what right?..to kill life


this isn't a diss, its a light analysis,
remember that befo' you go clenchin' a fist,
i don't get the contradiction in lines one and two,
in fact its feelin' the same through and through,
but i see you're not feeling unncessary death,
coz everyones deserves to choose thier last breath,
anwyays afterall you've done this for fun,
i just wanted to shoot this blank like a toy gun.
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Old 06-27-04, 11:06 AM   #3
Introspect.
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nice shit justice keep it up and mrchu wtf was that shit
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Old 06-27-04, 11:34 AM   #4
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mr chu that was actually a pretty good spit.....
it was just a freestyle huh?
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