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Old 06-27-04, 01:17 AM   #1
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10 seconds 1st verse

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All i need is 10 seconds 2 think of a track
In nine seconds i'll come at you get ur shit pushed back
Give me eight seconds I can cook you like some crack
In seven seconds I'll start goin at ya girl
at six seconds the bitch is hooked on me her booty doin the whirly whirl
what now nigga you gotta problem wit that
Cas i aint goin nowhere you know where im at
now the clocks seconds are at five
You want more i'll cut you worse then a circumsize
Cas bitch u dont want none
You must not know i gotta gun
In four seconds I'll start blastin fun
With me theres no need to reload
Cas after I'm done the whole place jus explodes
I send all u punk bitches to heaven
I'm so accurate i dont need the extra 3 seconds

ight people tell me wat u think.
If i need too work on anything plz let me know.
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Old 07-03-04, 08:08 PM   #2
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It Was Ok Need More Work
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Old 07-15-04, 01:00 AM   #3
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thank 4 da honesty.im up 4 some more fees back
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Old 07-16-04, 07:34 AM   #4
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How The Fuck Is This Audio
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Old 07-16-04, 07:35 AM   #5
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and what was with the first three rhymes linin ACK
then 2 lines rhymin IRL... that duznt go.
plus it was pretty wack. don take it personal
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Old 07-19-04, 12:49 AM   #6
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Anything else u wanna add.I'm new at this anyway im more of a balla i jus do this in my leisure.
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Old 07-19-04, 01:01 AM   #7
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Even though im new to it and i do it in my spare i enjoy doin it.and i wont stop tryin to get betta.
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