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More L is a bitch always going on a walk out..
spits like thongs up assholes..
..the way his shit's always squeezed out..
Probably some 16year old retard who trinyg ot splel..
You hear for one reason..
Ill say it what the hell...................Just one More L..*
Fuck 1 round, you no-showed at the weigh in..**
'Cause you need time..
............to prewrite before the battle could begin..
Your verse like your Country just going down under..
thought someone was hyping you up...
...........When they said here comes the boy blunder..
Looked at your profile where i found "Money and Wealth"..
Rascal solves the problem..
..............................By Ko' this man of his ill health..


*One more L = Loss...
**Didnt check in 1st..
Pz.

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yo wen he drops ill vote on this for now can u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1369886

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check in....

quit bitchin about me checkin in round 1 i check in when i spit
i waz asleep when you open dis, theres a time difference you dipshit
but it made no change, because your whole rap was rolling badly
all your words useless like a fingerless nigga at a bowling alley
how can you call yourself a veteran champ u a veteran chump
got confused when your girl had a dick and and didn't have a cunt
because when it come to gurls ur ugly always be scaring them
but u actually got one, surprise, this "chick" called Miriam*
so i recommend that you hide your face round RB and duck for cover
because i got mo skills,mo punches then rainy days in an english summer
so listen - your own quick 10 was a real shit 10 and it's in ur best interest to be quitting

More L

*reality tv show about a tranny http://www.transgenderzone.com/features/Miriam.htm

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Listen...i'll be flippin' the whole world system
Givin' it up and becommin' a christian - More L

lmfao

rascal....good structure....good flow......punches were aiight...ur opener ws nasty lmfao but it was aiight....ur personals were aiight overall 36/50

more L: nope...i wasnt feelin this....u had good flow but bad structure....and ur punches werent hittin
ur personals were there...u can see u tried...but they were only aiight
overall 27/50

vote: rascal


return the favuor and vote for this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131811

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rascal hands down L you jus got yo azz whooped straight up but you have potenial

aight.. both verses was coo.. but rascals won this to me hands down.. i think L had like one good punch that stuck to rascal, and that was this

"but it made no change, because your whole rap was rolling badly
all your words useless like a fingerless nigga at a bowling alley"

that was hot.. but i have to say that was the only thing you fought back wit.. if you had a couple more of those in there, you might have won.. Rascal had more punches and they hit a bit harder.. Keep up with rhyming tho, cause you bound to come up on your skills.. aight get at me

v/Rascal

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Rascal took this battle hands down.. nice flow and punches.. More L you had a good spit but take someone on your own level.

v/rascal

upping this for the last vote..
leave a link and i will vote on it ..
pz.

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come on what i said there ^^..
pz.

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I reckon More L took this battle because his lines aren't up and down like Rascal's verse, which is long, then short, and More L was more consistent and put more wit into his punches, Rascal's verse wasn't bad, but it looks like he filled a lot of his verse with dots, and the middle part of Rascal's verse was just hard to read, unless u can find a explaination, the middle part i find it hard to rhyme with, i dunno if you're not trying or something, but your verse is just not as good as More L, who has better punchlines, while Rascal's punches are played:

'Cause you need time..
............to prewrite before the battle could begin..
Your verse like your Country just going down under..
thought someone was hyping you up...
...........When they said here comes the boy blunder..
^^one of the good lines from Rascal

Looked at your profile where i found "Money and Wealth"..
Rascal solves the problem..
..............................By Ko' this man of his ill health..
^^ another of the better lines from Rascal


but it made no change, because your whole rap was rolling badly
all your words useless like a fingerless nigga at a bowling alley
how can you call yourself a veteran champ u a veteran chump
got confused when your girl had a dick and and didn't have a cunt
^^my favorite line from more L

The only part More L screwed up at is the ending, but the rest is good

vote: More L

plz hit up my battle and put a honest vote into it thank u:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132116

good battle overall; good job to both of you

peace

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watever ^^..
Uppin for votes.. leave a link ill vote on your battle..
pz.

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Yo dis was a good battle.......

1st Flow- L ya flow was good and i liked it, but it got a lil shakey at times..so try to make more sence and relate two sentences togeather like for example you said
"but it made no change, because your whole rap was rolling badly
all your words useless like a fingerless nigga at a bowling alley"
try to go off change like he didnt have enough money to get in the alley in tha first place na mean....but on the other hand that was you best line but you catch my drift....

Punches-ya punches werent nearly as good as Rascals, and dont brag ina battle like you were talkin about
"because i got mo skills,mo punches then rainy days in an english summer" again skills and punches have nothin to do wit the weather you could have said
"i got more THUNDER, then rainy days in a english summer" try to make your punches hit fuckin hard so hard that you think he might not be able to refrain from it...

Personals-i only saw one
"how can you call yourself a veteran champ u a veteran chump
got confused when your girl had a dick and and didn't have a cunt" and it still really wasnt all that good...and your not alone personals are the hardest to do for me cause im all about flow....try goin to the emergency center on the front page we can learn alot there...

multies-none what so ever from both mcee's

Rascal's flow-aaight flow L got you on dis one, stop wit all dat .........and shit.......
it gets annoying

punches-some of the best i have seen ina long time
"More L is a bitch always going on a walk out..
spits like thongs up assholes..
..the way his shit's always squeezed out"-thats some dope hard hittin shit keep it up

personals-your whole verse was like a personal specially
"Your verse like your Country just going down under..
thought someone was hyping you up...
...........When they said here comes the boy blunder..
Looked at your profile where i found "Money and Wealth"..
Rascal solves the problem..
..............................By Ko' this man of his ill health"-like i said some dope shit

Multies-none


well i got to go wit Rascal too many good punches and personals to not vote for him

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Rascal sucks big gay dick.
At least on the old RB...

But Rascal wins this for pure strength in punchlines that the other dude lacked. Both came like cat piss. But Rascal was just stronger and wittier.
Vote: Rascal

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