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State CapiTol 5 100.00%
Gods son 0 0%
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Old 06-27-04, 11:56 AM   #1
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State CapiTol vs Gods son

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iight you know the rules..
15 line max..
I'll spit first...
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Old 06-27-04, 11:59 AM   #2
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aiight koo............................................... ..................
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Old 06-27-04, 12:20 PM   #3
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My ~writtens are blind~ that i spit ~sick & devine~ at dis arrogant fool who "thinks too cocky" like there''s a ~dick in his mind~/
You dont know what kind~ of~ 'state' i'm in, i spit it so hott thats it always summertime
This nigga garbage & he''s leavin a bad ~odor~,
it''s like "ice on his neck" cuz he''s alwayz gettin tha cold ~shoulder~/
Translute State Capitol like ~plastic~ & make him give up rap like old ~habbits~/
Cuz he quick to "hop" on "nuts" like squirrels chased by ~rabbits~/
I'll Rip-Ya Spirits, <with rich Der-iv-a-tives-Man/
An, Ya Soul Will "Feel-It" Like "Blind-Kids-Hands", Its Part Of Tha Plan/
I'm Like A <Backwidz Frankenstien> How I <Dissmatle This Monstrosity>/
Teach Him How Ta "Rap Properly" An "Beat-Him-Down" Like "Frisky Dogs" Using "Deep-Philosophy"/
You just commited a capitol offense by battling me, so you and death have a date
Mo Murda BKI? (his sn) son you about to Be Killed In you own fuckin state
Gods Son Don't Need A Finisher Coz This Battle Never Started/
"Slice" States Chest Wit Blades So He's "Litteraly Half Hearted"//
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Old 06-27-04, 01:06 PM   #4
Decree Wun
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Even if you was in FlipMod Squad you couldn't Bust-a-Rhyme....
break-ya-spine. this win-is-mine,You gettin' ripped-N-declined....

How Can this Bitch Be "God's Son" When His Lyrics Are "Bad".....
Merk This Kid So Brutally, He gon' need a 6 Ft tall Maxy Pad.....
Like A Paraplegic tryin to Box, Your "Punches" Dont effect-Me....
Run Quick, Cause My Gatz Produce More "Pops" Then Pepsi....
Lines Will Cut right through you, leave a permanent stain on your carpet...
Got More "Juelz" Then Dipset..you bout to get merked by a Sick-Vet....
This Wack Bitch's raps are crashin to the bottom like a Blind Pilot.....
Ducktape your mouth-n- shoot you..so You can "Die Silent"....
raps couldnt be good even if u took a bath in wash-away-your-sins soap...
and you couldn't spit holy even if you gave head to the pope....

Take-dis-knife N Take-ya-life, hit u so hard u'd think i merked you twice...
Like a fat kid infront of a fresh baked cake..this bitch is gettin Sliced....


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Old 06-27-04, 01:49 PM   #5
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uppin fam lez go................................................ .
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Old 06-27-04, 01:51 PM   #6
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aight this was an aight battle

structure capitol

punches capitol

humor both

vocab both

complexity neither

overall vote capitol

yo godson u gotta fix up your structure that shit was mad hard to read other than that u did pretty goodf just work on ya punches capitol u did good nice flow structure punches tha whole 9 thats why i voted for u pc saty up
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Old 06-27-04, 02:02 PM   #7
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Capitols ran better

flow capital
punches tie
multies tie

vote capitol
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Old 06-27-04, 02:16 PM   #8
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This was a pretty good battle here... GodsSon you came harder than some of the previous verses I've seen from you-- you had your punches goin.. good use of wordplay also... The same goes for State Capitol also... I felt like States Flowed a lil better, and His structure was superior in this battle- Ima have to give the vote to State Capitol but only by a hair... good battle from both of you-- ez.
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Old 06-27-04, 02:27 PM   #9
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Hard choice. State Capitol had some good ones but that wash away your sins soap shit was whack as fuck. Although the second half of that bar was really good. Overall State Capitol had the better hits so...

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Old 06-27-04, 02:28 PM   #10
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state capitol: you had a hott verse it was pretty consistent all the way through....almost perfect structure i liked the rhyme scheme...punches were nice...not many hard ones but harder than gods son's punches...you definately took this battle tho with your finsisher probably harder than his whole verse...good multies and wordplay also

overall: 8/10

gods son there was no way you was gonna win with that verse punches were forced lines were stretched some punches were good others were either weak or played your structure was really bad and you should sorthen your lines some...the long lines isnt looking good...decent punches multies was str8 and so was wordplay flow was pretty consistent

overall :6/10

vote: state capitol

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Old 06-28-04, 05:59 AM   #11
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Both your flows were nice, but some of gods lines were stretched, plus state had a way cleaner structure n scheme... god, your lines were all over the place its confusing..

Wordplay was heavy in both ya verses, but state took it, punches hit harder and personals were solid...

v/ state capitol
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