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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
DeLeon 5 100.00%
FlagrantFoul 0 0%
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Old 06-28-04, 08:38 PM   #1
FlagrantFoul
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FlagrantFoul vs. DeLeon

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Checkity check in.

10 lines,
House rules,
check in.
 
Old 06-28-04, 08:41 PM   #2
DeLeon
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checkin...like it said..you drop first...
 
Old 06-28-04, 08:53 PM   #3
FlagrantFoul
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Hey, yo.....

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Yo, Foul's 'bout to set it off on this pretender from Texas
droppin' mad fists of fury on your mid solar plexus.
Flag pushes a Lexus, DeLeon borrows Mom's Saturn
You're dazed and ablaze by this rhythmical pattern.
Some say that I don't have hard enough punches
Spreading more cheese and ham than school kids' lunches.
But you're scared now, so go cry to your posse 'The Blueprint'
You'll leave here with a facial reminder, namely: my shoeprint.
Get ready for the 4th of July, get your dick out Granny's apple pie
You game's gone awry, I await your reply, go ice your black eye.

OUT.....in the blink of an eye.
 
Old 06-28-04, 09:12 PM   #4
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Yo....what's up? Get your verse posted.......................
 
Old 06-29-04, 04:12 PM   #5
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Quote:
Originally Posted by FlagrantFoul
Yo, Foul's 'bout to set it off on this pretender from Texas
droppin' mad fists of fury on your mid solar plexus.
Flag pushes a Lexus, DeLeon borrows Mom's Saturn
weak, not a punch, filler 0/10

You're dazed and ablaze by this rhythmical pattern.
Some say that I don't have hard enough punches
^whoever says that are correct
Spreading more cheese and ham than school kids' lunches.
...0/10

But you're scared now, so go cry to your posse 'The Blueprint'
You'll leave here with a facial reminder, namely: my shoeprint.
0/10

Get ready for the 4th of July, get your dick out Granny's apple pie
You game's gone awry, I await your reply, go ice your black eye.
first line was some sort of diss 0.5 fukit 1 /10

OUT.....in the blink of an eye.


Nice work kiddo 1/40
Quote:
Originally Posted by DeLeon
this Jap claims he a thug... u would never be hard ..
Cuz the only shit u hustle for was receiving a green card..
[B]LOL nice. This was good. Personal and witty. 7/10

half ur family were strugglin to live this sake is tru
Cuz they all got kill crossin the ocean... ur the only one dat made it through..
werent feeling this 0/10

you dont have any skills...but trust i got plenty..
and you couldnt be #1 if i put your face on a penny ..
erm.....cudda worded it better...get what ya meant......er 4/10

I aint gonna let go of your shame you gonna have to shoot me..
Cuz the Closest you been to taking someone out was your mother for sushi
[FONT=tahoma]Wasnt great, but the whole Japanese personal thing was ok...5/10[...the takin out lines are played./B]

im gonna hit you with a FlagrantFoul and leave ya ass benched
cuz like your eyes....your the only one thats gettin ya ass stretched
haha nice finisher. 6/10


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Old 06-28-04, 09:33 PM   #6
DeLeon
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damn hold up playa...went to eat...i'll drop in 15
 
Old 06-28-04, 10:03 PM   #7
DeLeon
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alright kid....im a little rusty
from Tokyo huh? ha ha
im gonna take it easy on you..LOOK AT YOUR RECORD!

this Jap claims he a thug... u would never be hard ..
Cuz the only shit u hustle for was receiving a green card..
half ur family were strugglin to live this sake is tru
Cuz they all got kill crossin the ocean... ur the only one dat made it through..
you dont have any skills...but trust i got plenty..
and you couldnt be #1 if i put your face on a penny ..
I aint gonna let go of your shame you gonna have to shoot me..
Cuz the Closest you been to taking someone out was your mother for sushi
im gonna hit you with a FlagrantFoul and leave ya ass benched
cuz like your eyes....your the only one thats gettin ya ass stretched
 
Old 06-28-04, 11:34 PM   #8
DeLeon
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uppin.....
 
Old 06-29-04, 08:54 AM   #9
DeLeon
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uppin...and foul dont take that shit the wrong way kid.....
 
Old 06-29-04, 09:14 AM   #10
Mad Dog
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That was a very 1 sided battle in my opinion DeLeon had this hands down came harder had better punches wordplay i really liked the way he used the guys nationality in his verse real good structure and a nice closer i dont think you realistically had any problems here props.

Flag: You need a lot of work dawg im afraid you gots no-hardly any punches strayed from the battle altogether weak wordplay very basic struc wasnt all that bad but you need to be careful on who you battle

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Old 06-29-04, 09:39 AM   #11
Decree Wun
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dayui,

flag: that shit was sick fam..i was feelin ur verse....good personals SICk wordplay...good punches...good flow...good everything this was a very nice verse form you keep it up

deleon:" SICK VERSE ASWELL...good pcunhes..u had better structure...good flow...better personals...and good punches....this was a
pretty good battle but the winner is

Deleon

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Old 06-29-04, 10:01 AM   #12
Ca'lam
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rofl......deleon why you do him like that nigga....
flagorant, you have potential brah, cause i liked the why you rhymed that verse, but ti was filler man... you got have dem punches man.. and the ones you attempted were mediocore.. not tryna be an ass, but just workon your punches and you should be ok....


deleon-lmao... funny shit man.. that shit was humor, bonus points for hurmor always from me.. personals was there, punches was.. nice lil verse..


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Old 06-29-04, 12:16 PM   #13
DeLeon
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alright...uppin
 
Old 06-29-04, 04:18 PM   #14
Envee
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Uhh nice shit man nice man F uhh in not feelin tha last bar so much....

D good shit everything rhymed it was ncie i liked tha flow 2...

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