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BLIND SPIT SPIT WHENEVER
SPIT DUE BY 10 pm tuesday night
NO FEEDING

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checki in

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check

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[.Diabolic:.]

kid.. ur rhymes wouldnt be golden if i gave you the "midas-touch"-*
u call your self a "street-legend" but u cant throw a "legit.punch"-
you can polish and engrave your verse in silver it still wont shine-
your crew being good?thats far-fetched.. ur the flaw in the design-**
you hold about as much weight as a crippled kitten can lift-
ur punches are hittin like a blind boxer with a broken fist-
i could put you in a comba but a doctor would say u still aint sick-
gonna spit a wack verse......... so his wounds will be self inflicted-***
you cant handle weight im puttin out 2 much for u to b contendin-
ive lyrically murdered you.. thats fiction..not a fuckin legend-

*midas was the egyptian pharoah that turned evrything to gold he touched
**he is whats ruining the crew pretty much
*** meaning he will be embarressed from his verse

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yo.........

Its a process of deletion when i spit scriptures//
My ill testaments will rip ya, and hard punches will shift ya//
you gonna be callin for help when verbz penetrate ya//
Ima lyrically grab this gat, unload a clip of humiliation, then let pain embrace ya//
Im giving you this sign, similiar to a prementition//
You cant throw blows wit me you outta condition//
And im...........outta position, if im not the hottest addition//
Shadow suits you right, incapable to make moves//
I spit fire so i bake dudes, Attemptin to make it big//
I got the authentik Intelligence to realized you spelled ya crew wrong in ya sig//

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[.Diabolic:.]

ayo you should stop topic battles and stick to normal battles it was hot nice flow and style and punches and personals were good.
street legend weak

vote shadow keep it tight

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RePlay
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Nice ass battle

Shadow - You had some good punches and sick wordplay...

Street - Ehhh okay punches okay wordplay

Punches - Shadow
Wordplay - Shadow
Opener - Shadow
Closer - Street
Flow - Street
Personals - Shadow
Structure - Shadow

I vote for : Shadow

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As Life Goes On Mixtape Try Outs All Good Audio Heads Peep

I liked shadows wordplay and punches thats what killed street my vote goes to shadow

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The Black Wall Street

kid.. ur rhymes wouldnt be golden if i gave you the "midas-touch"-*
u call your self a "street-legend" but u cant throw a "legit.punch"-
you can polish and engrave your verse in silver it still wont shine-
your crew being good?thats far-fetched.. ur the flaw in the design-**
you hold about as much weight as a crippled kitten can lift-
ur punches are hittin like a blind boxer with a broken fist-
i could put you in a comba but a doctor would say u still aint sick-
gonna spit a wack verse......... so his wounds will be self inflicted-***
you cant handle weight im puttin out 2 much for u to b contendin-
ive lyrically murdered you.. thats fiction..not a fuckin legend-

I think this was flawless all the way through with structure and wordplay

Its a process of deletion when i spit scriptures//
My ill testaments will rip ya, and hard punches will shift ya//
you gonna be callin for help when verbz penetrate ya//
Ima lyrically grab this gat, unload a clip of humiliation, then let pain embrace ya//
Im giving you this sign, similiar to a prementition//
You cant throw blows wit me you outta condition//
And im...........outta position, if im not the hottest addition//
Shadow suits you right, incapable to make moves//
I spit fire so i bake dudes, Attemptin to make it big//
I got the authentik Intelligence to realized you spelled ya crew wrong in ya sig//

street i think yours was didnt get that good until the end u started off rhyming ya too much in your rhymes

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The Black Wall Street

eww

street: you need to step your game up fam
your shit was too basic
ok punches
ok flow
bad structure
shit was stretched to heyll
your personals werent hittin to hard
overrall: bad verse

shadow: your shit was ok
your personals werent hitting to hard
but you had good punches
good structure
good flow

vote:shadow

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OMG No Comp Shadow Won Hands Down

Shadow

Open-kid.. ur rhymes wouldnt be golden if i gave you the "midas-touch"-*
u call your self a "street-legend" but u cant throw a "legit.punch"-

won Wit That

bestline-you can polish and engrave your verse in silver it still wont shine-
your crew being good?thats far-fetched.. ur the flaw in the design-**

nice

worsteline-none

Closer-you cant handle weight im puttin out 2 much for u to b contendin-
ive lyrically murdered you.. thats fiction..not a fuckin legend-

Nice

Overall 9/10

Street

Open-Its a process of deletion when i spit scriptures//
My ill testaments will rip ya, and hard punches will shift ya//

weak

Bestline-none

worsteline-2many

closer-I spit fire so i bake dudes, Attemptin to make it big//
I got the authentik Intelligence to realized you spelled ya crew wrong in ya sig//

alright

overall 7/10

winner-shadow

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