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Old 06-29-04, 04:22 AM   #1
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Wanksta Pt2 (Contrersal Diss) Feat inFamous

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Old 07-01-04, 10:27 AM   #2
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Ha... went throwback on the beat... hahaha

You new to audio son?... Need work on FLOW... A LOT...

Stop mumblin doggie... This not really keepin my attention duke...

wow... why do all these text heads come to audio and think just cuz they have nice lyrix that the tracks hot?...

Work on ya flow/emotion/delivery duke... come on now son... and pronounciate


2nd Kat... Same feedback as the first kat^... take the same pointers as i gave the first kat... work on the flow/emotion/delivery doggie..


Leave feed on mine:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132704

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Old 07-01-04, 10:49 PM   #3
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yo shits hella wack oh yeah and fuck brooklyn nigga fuck biggie its all about oakland cali motha fucka you got some wack ass flows and if i had audio id'e slaughter yo bitch ass nigga what?? and you aint no king you fuckin faggot.go ahead and make a diss rap bout me i dont give a fuck bitch thats shits gon be wack anyways.
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Old 07-02-04, 10:53 AM   #4
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Alright you need to work on your flow,A LOT.You also need to pronounciate clearer.Need to work on ya delivery also.
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Old 07-03-04, 10:14 AM   #5
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tell ya man infamous to change his name

please

i dont want anybody to get us confused

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