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Young Dez 0 0%
*The~Star* 5 100.00%
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Old 07-01-04, 10:10 PM   #1
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Young Dez vs *The~Star*

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10 lines
No strecthing
No D/R
No crew
No Biting

YD spiting first

Good Luck

Let's get started
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Old 07-01-04, 10:23 PM   #2
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yo star don't play around wit me cuz i got guns dat pop like pringles/
it will make u lean back like Fat Joe's single
battling me u must be insane
I'll snatch away yo life like 50 snatched ja rule's chain
u broke and I hold grands like da Rubba Band man
but nobody know dis cat like da rest of da D12 band
on the mic I 'll dismantle dis man like P.Diddy did Da Band
and da gun will put u to an early sleep like its da Sandman
I don't even wanna battle dis chump
he gay he the type of guy who rolls around wit high heels and pumps
I'll kill u and battling u tipsy
cuz u fuckin wit Young Dez da Prince of da City
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Old 07-01-04, 10:40 PM   #3
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aight Star yo turn spit yo shit ..................
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Old 07-02-04, 12:07 AM   #4
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Started nice,but it ended crappy.Let’s go……..

Non-talented, couldn’t think of ya own, your whole spit is based on celebrity names
Non-creative, can’t be original you’ll never have fame in the battling game
Should get protection for your chest, cuz you wouldn’t wanna get popped
But the way these words are hitting you, you just automatically drop
The words that you write compare to wind, they just blow by
My words stick in ya head cuz my flow smooth, straight leave ya mouth dry
Could never stop dropping these rhymes, that's why I'm on top of tha grind
Unlike you, you suck, you wouldn’t succeed if ya talent was working in the coal mind
Scientist drill holes to get to the earth’s core
I’m doing what they doing to ya brain, leaving you eternally lyrically sore


I got this.Hit more categories than he did.Matter-of-fact I hit all,unlike ol' dude.

Let Tha Votes Begin
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Old 07-02-04, 08:57 AM   #5
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Damn can we get some votes?
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Old 07-02-04, 09:24 AM   #6
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Young Dez i liked your verse and the use of all the celeb references but it seemed you were more focused on that then attackin' The Star. Even though i really liked you Fat Joe line the pringles part was sorta play'd but still fit, My opinion is that you just didn't come at Star like she came at you, only becuase star came directly at you. The Lack Of Personals was disappointing for sure. Stars last line i thought closed strong. Stars verse had the structure set up, Dez you stopped makin line markers after the first line i don't know why.
Keep it live both of ya'll...
Vote STAR

The Star I thought you verse was good a bit weaker then you past battles, though definately.
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Old 07-02-04, 09:27 AM   #7
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My Fault didn't know you'll had a poll vote requirement of 100.
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Old 07-02-04, 09:59 AM   #8
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^Thanks 4 checking it out anyway.I'll hit ya battle up.
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Old 07-02-04, 11:29 AM   #9
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Old 07-02-04, 03:58 PM   #10
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Old 07-02-04, 04:02 PM   #11
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good shit first lady ma...........thats how you rep........
you came at ol dude wit some fire..........
cant vote cause we in the same crew.......but jus giving you your props
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Old 07-02-04, 07:33 PM   #12
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Old 07-02-04, 09:07 PM   #13
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From: A place where u need to rap to keep ur head in the game.....itz fucked an everywhere i go i'm put inta a frame....rappin setz me bak an setz me free.....if u niggaz really new me....u just might be able to see
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yo...i'm goin fo star kuz everythin wuz betta...aight battle but star beat u in every categorie but not by much...but still ur beat

vote=Star
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Old 07-02-04, 10:44 PM   #14
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Old 07-03-04, 02:04 AM   #15
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Ahh man the star you won and the reason is ya rhyme was creative flowed better and the punches werent on the elementry basis like when you said The words that you write compare to wind, they just blow by
My words stick in ya head cuz my flow smooth, straight leave ya mouth dry
that won it so my vote goes to the star
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