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30 mins deadline

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so who the fuk u giving a 30mins deadline?...
or u scared i could kill u with with my deadly lines?....
nigga all i gatta do is CALL U BITCH 1 TIME/and u see urself spitting from the bottomline/
listen...im d captain of the boat/if u think u welcomed aboard,you gats ta be a fucking goat/clap ur ass to d ground/nigga i could sell u for a fucking pound/get u ate by my hound..cos u just the shitty MC arround/u pussynigga..cant pull a fucking trigga/infact u would pee on ja jeanz/when u see me on the streets/im untouchable..this spit is topnotchabe/whateva u call me i push it away/betta dont say im a bitch and u safe/b4 calling me out u should have thought twice/cos i aint letting u go after i clap u up twice/thats it,i got u in grains of rice....huh?

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listen young man...i made that 1 easy for u so i dont think it shoul take u an infinity to reply....u said 30mins...duh....holy fuck?

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yo your lines were terrable, you, couldn't create one label/
your minds not stable, and all ya lyrics are slurred and think ur a rebel/
i'll twist this bitch into a differen't shape, shiver n quake u sliverin snake/
im here 4 every diss dat u take, u are just a little hoe dat i really hate/
This bitch couldn't rap... if I bitch slapped her for bein so crap/
I have no remorse, it'll be just pain i'll force, it'll be like relay laps/
half this shit you said clearly didn't make any sense, are u depressed/
damn i would be if I had you on my case everyday, your a phony!!!!/
Take da shit inside............... it'll show dat infinit is killin dis nit wit/
all i gotta say is hi to make ur wrists slit wid one of my disses dats hit!/

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Sums up your own verse..

XxXtasy took this one for punching you up like a fag.. you just been murke by a girl.. so you are Rb's Clown..

you need punches not fillers.. you need flow not nothing..
pz.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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fucking cunt it took u 3 hours to spit back that weak rap...next time think b4 u put a deadline...u biro dick....


votes peeps.....

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shut the fuck up bitch lol look at ya structure lol!

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look whos spoken...mayne i just want them votes and put n end to all this joke.....


upin!

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so who the fuk u giving a 30mins deadline?...
or u scared i could kill u with with my deadly lines?....
nigga all i gatta do is CALL U BITCH 1 TIME/and u see urself spitting from the bottomline/
listen...im d captain of the boat/if u think u welcomed aboard,you gats ta be a fucking goat/clap ur ass to d ground/nigga i could sell u for a fucking pound/get u ate by my hound..cos u just the shitty MC arround/u pussynigga..cant pull a fucking trigga/infact u would pee on ja jeanz/when u see me on the streets/im untouchable..this spit is topnotchabe/whateva u call me i push it away/betta dont say im a bitch and u safe/b4 calling me out u should have thought twice/cos i aint letting u go after i clap u up twice/thats it,i got u in grains of rice....huh?

The only thing bad about the verse is da structure and thats it.

Mulities-Few
Flow-Good
Punches-Alrite
Complexity-This is the only place Infintie got you
Orignality-Good Wordplay
Overalll-Good verse but not great


yo your lines were terrable, you, couldn't create one label/
your minds not stable, and all ya lyrics are slurred and think ur a rebel/
i'll twist this bitch into a differen't shape, shiver n quake u sliverin snake/
im here 4 every diss dat u take, u are just a little hoe dat i really hate/
This bitch couldn't rap... if I bitch slapped her for bein so crap/
I have no remorse, it'll be just pain i'll force, it'll be like relay laps/
half this shit you said clearly didn't make any sense, are u depressed/
damn i would be if I had you on my case everyday, your a phony!!!!/
Take da shit inside............... it'll show dat infinit is killin dis nit wit/
all i gotta say is hi to make ur wrists slit wid one of my disses dats hit!/

Flow-Good
Mulities-None
Punches-Weak
Complexity-This is the only place Infintie got you
Overalll-Ok verse, close battle

Very Close Battle, but i will have to go with the verse i was feeling more, no disrespect to you infinite.

Vote XXXtasy

Return da favor, link are in da sig.

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This battle was kinda weak. X came with some alright punches. I couldnt follow infinites flow. X brought heat in his disses and did it in a short time. While infinites flow took like 3 hours.

Vote - Xxxtasy

Vote on mines...Links in tha sig

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infinite:

heres the problem with your flow... your lines are too long. try to cap them at 15 syllables, and keep most of them around 13 i would say. also, for example, rebel and label dont rhyme too well, because its just an end rhyme, but its on two syllable words so it sounds odd. basically, if you use words with multiple syllables, try to get at least two syllables rhyming. also in battles, dont worry so much about flow or multis... you really gotta work on your punches.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

xxtasy: i wasnt feelin ur shit at all i dont know why
your punches were ugly...some were ok..mos' were ugly 5.5./10
your personals were ok though 6/10
i wasnt feelin ur flow it was ugly 5/10
your structure was....UGH....5/10

infinite: yiou had better punches at least 7/10
your personals were aiight too 6/10
your flow.....was better then hers but not too good 6.5/10
your structure was ok 6/10

vote: infinite

i aint gon poll vote until u drop an honest explained vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

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ON THIS BATTLE I SAY XXXTASY HAD THIS ONE. MY GIRL HAD BETTA PUNCHES AND CAME HARDER THEN INFINITE. YO MY BOY, YOU HAD TOO TOO SOFT BARS SON YOU NEED TO COME HARDER YO ISH IS WEAK. HOW A GIRL GO MORE AGGRESSIVE THEN YOU. ANY 1 SEE ME. SEARCH TECHRHYMES AND SEE TO VOTE ON MY BATTLES.

I BIN VOTE 4 MY XXXTASY

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TECHRHYMES

yo thanx to all y'all that voted for me....i wasnt even xpecting it cos i gatta confess i really sucked on that spit...hehe..thanx again....

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oh yeah........polls too....thanx..........

uppin!!!

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