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Inimical Female | 0 | 0% | |
Malefic | 5 | 100.00% | |
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07-02-04, 10:09 PM | #1 | ||
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Malefic Vs. Inimical Female
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Due in 1 Hour No Feedin No Biting No Dick Riding Check In within 5 Minutes.
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07-02-04, 10:09 PM | #2 | ||
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IP:
I'm checked in.
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07-02-04, 10:15 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
ok. I'm checked in sorry it took a bit. lets get started
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07-02-04, 10:32 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
Bitch...
sum one help this bitch, she's lost. she needs a net guide- tryna walk in my world? your like your avi. Outside- Trick don't make me cry....I'll leave your organ's out dried. Thinkin you win....right...girl you must be watchin Sci-fi- Or countin dick-ride's...You thinkin your name sounds tight.. Harmfull not quite....not even your cunt put's up a fight- Aint that right? ur come'in late, jus like your check in- If I can re-ckon. your words like your rapperz' no weapon- Last bar to rip you. I'll make it quite hospitable.... I'll lay u out like Son of Sam. An make your status critical- Next...
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07-02-04, 10:55 PM | #5 | |
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Malefic you aint gonna win
You couldnt spit for shit if you was a stupid kid chewin tobacco I'll leave your ass pointing home like the extraterrestrial(ET) you just wanna go home cuz im in control Im a murderous verbalist my words are like fists so I insist you dont mess wit me cuz I'll smoke your ass like rolled weed have you bowing to my knees like the mad cow disease Bitch its over, please. |
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07-02-04, 11:22 PM | #6 | |
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uppin
IP:
Uppin' for some votes on this battle....................
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07-03-04, 04:17 AM | #7 | ||
Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP:
that was some ill shit from you both but i think the new girl took that one
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07-03-04, 06:52 AM | #8 | |||||||||||
Flyweight
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Malefic Vs. Inimical Female
IP:
WARNING: this vote is not a reflection of how good you are
...but a reflection of how good you were to the other battle Malefic- nice opener 7/10 Quote:
good r/s and w/p 6/10 Quote:
gettin a little personal good flow so far 7/10 Quote:
little personal 6/10 Quote:
good closer vocab w/p 7/10 Quote:
Inimical Female- not a very good opener short 1st stretch 2nd bad w/p 3/10 Quote:
this was a good atempt at a punch bad w/p 4/10 Quote:
this was ok w/p pitty this lines out here by itself 3/10 Quote:
this was ok rhyming but it could be set up a bit better 4/10 Quote:
overall- malefic... you had a better rhyme scheme and more consistent flow ...good battle vote- malefic
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07-03-04, 11:36 AM | #9 | ||
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IP:
good lookin. uppin (1)
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07-03-04, 04:26 PM | #10 | ||
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IP:
Uppin 2.
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07-03-04, 09:06 PM | #11 | |
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IP:
Malefic I was feeling your style man, you had some nice personals, good flow and structure. The one about dick-ride that was syck, had a double meaning on it. Even was some multis in the verse, I was really feelin it.
Inimical - Your structure was all over the place, which usually hurts your flow, sometimes the structure can be off but syllables are on and flow is good. I just wasnt seeing either one, you did use a few multis in a couple lines, but they werent hittin for anything. Your punches just werent there, come harder next time. v/Malefic |
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07-03-04, 10:02 PM | #12 | ||
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IP:
Thanks Alot. Uppin 3.
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07-03-04, 10:10 PM | #13 | ||
That's Gangsta
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IP:
it doesnt say no crew votes so because im bored imma drop an honest vote
sum one help this bitch, she's lost. she needs a net guide- tryna walk in my world? your like your avi. Outside- ok punch....this shit was pretty good 7/10 Trick don't make me cry....I'll leave your organ's out dried. Thinkin you win....right...girl you must be watchin Sci-fi- this shit was good..second line was decent 7.5/10 Or countin dick-ride's...You thinkin your name sounds tight.. Harmfull not quite....not even your cunt put's up a fight- lollllllllll at the second line 8/10 Aint that right? ur come'in late, jus like your check in- If I can re-ckon. your words like your rapperz' no weapon- this was a fuckin ill line..nice 8.5/10 Last bar to rip you. I'll make it quite hospitable.... I'll lay u out like Son of Sam. An make your status critical- shit was aiight not too good for acloser but decent 7/10 inimical female Malefic you aint gonna win You couldnt spit for shit if you was a stupid kid chewin tobacco was that sapost to rhyme..cause it didnt /// 6/10 I'll leave your ass pointing home like the extraterrestrial(ET) you just wanna go home cuz im in control ....nope... 6/10 Im a murderous verbalist my words are like fists so I insist you dont mess wit me doesnt rhyme...eww 5/10 cuz I'll smoke your ass like rolled weed have you bowing to my knees like the mad cow disease Bitch its over, please. nopppppppppe this does not make sense 5.5/10 lol this was one sided.. vote: malefic
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07-03-04, 10:10 PM | #14 | |
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IP:
Malefic Won that battle cuz... I liked the rhyme scheme and there was better structure in his/her verse... some of the punches were cool too.
as for inmical female.. the structure, punchlines and rhyme scheme can be better.... V/ MALEFIC Hit me up with a vote on my battle, will you? http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132932 |
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07-04-04, 05:14 AM | #15 | ||
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IP:
Nice. Uppin 4.
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