iight man u spit 1st and it be 4-7 lines iight?

Hurry up and post back after me, i don't got time.
Say my name, that's only way you'll say a hot line(Jae Burnz(Burnz something hot))/
You spit hard but i bet if i seen you it would be a hi now.
It was live befo, but when i came round it became a shy town/
Take that icon off you wish you was pac.
Take a look at our names, I'm jae burnz, so you not hot(jae Burnz(burnz something hot burns))/

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u sound way 2 confident


yo flyweight don't eva let yo gaurd down burnz betta look out
cuz i took out enough of yo fam 2 have a muthafuckin cookout

yo be like kanye west and start walkin with christ
cuz fuckin wit me is more of a gamble den a pack of dice

u don't kno dat i'll murda u and and do it again in da after life
belive me u lost yo mine rushin me 2 spit my line

i'm shYtowm i don't care bout yo life nigga cuz i got time

yo yo verse wuz iight

u need 2 take dat 2 audio tho cuz ppl dunno how u say yo ryhems on text

yea i feel you people never do but i have no mic righ tnow but yea uppin......

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JaeBurnz354 Drop:

Hurry up and post back after me, i don't got time.
Say my name, that's only way you'll say a hot line
ha 1st line was weak and 2nd line was a self-glorification line 3.5/10
You spit hard but i bet if i seen you it would be a hi now.
It was live befo, but when i came round it became a shy town
u used his name atleast....but still weak 5/10
Take that icon off you wish you was pac.
Take a look at our names, I'm jae burnz, so you not hot
what the fuck self-glorification line again! and don't use hot twice in 3 bars not a smart move boi 1/10

overall: 4/10



Shytown Drop:

yo flyweight don't eva let yo gaurd down burnz betta look out
cuz i took out enough of yo fam 2 have a muthafuckin cookout
blah! barbeque style used his name against him properly tho 5/10
yo be like kanye west and start walkin with christ
cuz fuckin wit me is more of a gamble den a pack of dice
aight wordplay but self-glorification second line 5/10
u don't kno dat i'll murda u and and do it again in da after life
belive me u lost yo mine rushin me 2 spit my line
i'm shYtowm i don't care bout yo life nigga cuz i got time
weak weak weak yet again 4.5/10

overall: 4.8/10

vote goes to shytown

do a honest vote on my shit links in my signature etcetera .vs. me

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uppin 4 votes..........Vote .........uppin 4 votes

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upppin 4 votes people!!! cum on yaw i vote all da time and we need 2 change dat not votin shit cuz we got battles dat last WAY 2 long and its only 5 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!

word uppin 4 votes......Vote.uppin 4 votes........

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yo get dis battle ova wit i have 2 battles out now dat been going on 4eva, just plz vote 4 one of dem, i vote all da time and people neeva vote on my battles so plz vote!!!!!!

uppin 4 votes.......VOTE..........uppin 4 votes...

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Yo is anyone gonna vote on our battle 4real 4real?

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yo thas fucked up nobody battles in here yo even when you vote for their battle

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U.........p.........p.........i...........n....... ..

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