Bring it rudeboy!

house rulme dawg
u start spittin
20mins startin now
peace dawg

Im surprised u got the guts to clash me/
Did some1 tell u a lie and say u can trash me?/
Ull never win however way u attack me/
Ur 20 years old and still suffer from acne!/
I dnt care bout u and the crew u back/
U call ur country belgium, i call it Euro Trash/

Half way thru and Im almost done/
Just admit it uve already lost son/
Do u know for acne ppl use cream not cum/
The best advice is not always from ur mum/
No need to be shocked or stunned/
Check the talent/
Ive killed u and i aint evn swore once/

im a killa & im here to trash yo head /
ima smash it agenst a wall till u muthafuckin dead /
get ready to get yo ass kicked in this shit /
not givin a fuck bout the fagget im battlin with /
reach for dem desert E'z , i bet u be screamin for yo mommy /
im bout to kill ,got my nutz on yo chin,what would u do , i am the enemy /
what could u do if we if i start shootin on you /
better start runnin 'cuz im spittin the truth /
2 all my enemy's im here to fuck y'al up with 1 shot /
droppin new flowz drive by with my crew pullin out my glock /
i am crayze runnin shit on the streetz /
bein a gangsta outta hell with sum new beatz /

vote for this shit
honest votes needed
dont take it 2 long i aint got all day
pz

vote for this stuff in here

I Like Hellrazazors Style

Vote:hellrazor


Yo Vote Marx
Marx Vs Slugga
Marx Vs Lyondreds

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flow-emasraW
punches-tie
personals-hellrazor
vocab-none
multiz-emasraW
metaphors-none
enjoyment-hellrazor
opener -emasraW
closer-both bad,but hellrazor's was better
best line-hellrazor

vote~hellrazor~

return the favor plz
Money vs Lyondreds

^^^^
sorry,forgot about the rules

My vote goes to hellrazor because he had the best line,and like marx said,god style
It was a very close battle
But in the end hellrazor's verse was better
emasraW was pretty good to
good job to both

vote-hellrazor

still need sum votes for this 1
peace dawgz

ok:
hellrazor- ur verse was good here, ur punches were hard and ur disses were raw,
ya flow is good too, it kinda reminded me of a story or song, overall this was tight, and u do have a certain style
emasraw:some of your lines didn't rhyme and u used me on the end too many times, but overall decent verse, just didn't come as hard as hellrazor.
VOTE:HELLRAZOR

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ppl vote honest votes needed

emashraW- your rhymes are bunk, they dont rhyme
i really wasent feelin the verse that good
Hallrazor- ur verse was good and better then Ema's because the punches were good n the flow was alot better then emashraw's

v/Hellrazor

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yo both return the favour n please return a vote, the battles are in my sig

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definitly emasraW

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