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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Hellrazor 0 0%
Hoops 5 100.00%
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Old 07-05-04, 07:08 AM   #1
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Hoops Vs. HellRazor

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Old 07-05-04, 07:41 AM   #2
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think u a champion , with over 600 posts & betta go shoot sum hoops
get ready for this killa , u aint a spitta , check it out it aint in ur roots
1more time for the rhyme agen , u die & u cry im 'bout take yo life
muthafucker aint gone win this time , im bustin shit like sum ak 45
get on yo knees & pray muthafucker , HellRaZoR in this shit spittin dem flames
sum1 gotta tell u bout the warrior from hell , battling me aint a fuckin game
the muthafuckin real , spittin new shit till u muthafuckers drop
im bout to kill ya with 1 muthafuckin killa rhyme shot
ur name says u a vet , but still u don't make thread
bust it through yo brains now im sure u gotta b dead
check this fake emcee tryin to bring out the pain
my shit keeps comin out this a muthafuckin chain
u gotta undastand i don't give a fuck
im bout to take ova this shit , admit shit u suck
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Old 07-05-04, 07:42 AM   #3
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this kid lashed out, but didnt think id reply to his call..
if i only posted one bar,your verse wouldnt matter at all..
this kid couldnt hoola my hoop, if he was at toys r us..
and even if he caught on fire,girls wouldnt say hes "hot stuff"..
hellrazor couldnt cut shit,if he had 20 foot sissors..
couldnt rock mics if i baught him a #23 jersy for christmas..
you wouldnt be sick if you caught amonia in low degrees..
and where you steal ya colon-rhymes, to me aint a mystery..(toilets)
i flip niggas with a rhyme scheme thats so damn mean..
kids like a crack fiend,the way he screams off screen..
and when i say you dont measure up.. i mean it literally..
this battles like a bad tailor, she didnt fit him to me..
dont be mad cause no one on RB will tend to you..
votes goes likes this:5-0, like ya verse was invisible..



had to make sure you posted .. aight g'luck..
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Old 07-05-04, 07:53 AM   #4
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aight UPPIN...vote one this and get this done with guys .. leave links and we will return the votes to your battles
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Old 07-05-04, 10:07 AM   #5
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ok, readin through hellrazors verse i couldnt relly undastand what chu wus tryin 2 git across in sum lines, i think you were tryin 2 be 2 complex but u wus usin 2 many syllables. also sum words seemed 2 me like they wus in the wrong place or sumthin.

"think u a champion , with over 600 posts & betta go shoot sum hoops"
thats not relly a diss, i jus dont git it na mean.. there wus more bud i cant be bother findin em.

hoops, yo shit wus aiight. i liked this bar-
this kid couldnt hoola my hoop, if he was at toys r us..
and even if he caught on fire,girls wouldnt say hes "hot stuff"..
that wus prolly ya best line, basically, hoops shit made more sence 2 me, and sum of his bars were used pretty well, so im gon give this vote 2 hoops..

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Old 07-05-04, 10:13 AM   #6
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Wassup this was a cool batt le i geuss, i mean Hellrazor the thought was there...haha. nah your verse was aight, nothin special, you looked like you were tryin to be hard when you can't even throw a punch which is funny to me but fuck it you gave it your best shot.

Hoops your verse was cool, nothin special or mindblowing but it was enough to beat Razor. Had a few nice punches in there which was better than Razors whole verse.

V:Hoops

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Old 07-05-04, 10:14 AM   #7
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Old 07-05-04, 01:21 PM   #8
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^already voted on that hehe... aight.. uppin to end this battle.. 3 more votes, just poll em in real quick .. leave links if you want you battles voted on
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Old 07-07-04, 10:34 AM   #9
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uppin thi sbattle.. need 3 more votes.. leave links if you want to get your shit voted on.. i want this batte closed lol.. end it plzzzzz
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Old 07-07-04, 11:33 AM   #10
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I wasnt too impressed...I thought hoops coulda came harder. Not that he really needed to, Hellrazor was pretty much off from the start.

Hellrazor it seemed as if you were running out of stuff to say towards the end, cause ya structure was gettin off, and ya flow was gettin pretty basic. You had a lot of filler stuff in there also, I suppose tryin to keep ya flow intact. The multies, you cry and you die just wasnt workin man, those hurt you more than they help you...make em make a lil more sense next time.

Hoops you were good with the flow and structure, but you said a lot of corny stuff. The 20 foot scissors, hot stuff, I mean they were good ideas and metas, but it just wasnt hard stuff. I think this was more of a commical battle for you...but it was enough for you to win it pretty easily, cause the flow was tight and structure was sound and easy to read.

v/Hoops

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Old 07-07-04, 12:17 PM   #11
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hold on i'll vote but i'm about to get kicked off i'll come back
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Old 07-07-04, 01:29 PM   #12
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Aaah nice battle i guess Hoops ive seen better

<Breakdown>
Punches - Hoops
Wordplay - Hoops
Structure - Hell
Opener - Hoops
Closer - Hell
Flow - Hoops

Winner - Hoops
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