10-15 lines
no dr hate or crew
u spit first
u get 20 mins to spit after check in....

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YOU COULD"NT SPIT AN INSANE 16 IF YA LIFE WAS ON THE LINE
I'LL BE BACK IN A MINUTE,
DAMN, YA WIFE IS ON THE LINE

I COULD OF RETIRED LIKE J BUT I OPT TO LINGER
I;LL HAVE YA BITCH SCREAMING OUT LIKE AN OPERA SINGER

IF YOU GOT A REP WITH YA HANDS
THEN YOU THE FUCK YOU BANG WITH
YOU PROBALLY NICE A RAPPING ,,,IN SOME OTHER LANGUAGE

IM A LYRICAL KING
LIKE SWISS THE BEAT GOD
YOUSA A FAGGOT MULTI-COLORED LIKE A PEACOCK
THIS BATTLES 1 SIDED LIKE A FAT KID ON A SEESAW

ITS THE ONE VERSE SOME BUM
THIS MATCH IMA WIND
AND IF YOU A FLAME IM BLOWING YOU OUT LIKE A MATCH IN THE WIND

MY SHIT IS TOO EXCLUSIVE, I NEED CLOSED DOORS
IM ALL IN THE GAME LIKE MADDEN 04

IM NOT SEAN PAUL
BUT I COULD MAKE IT CLAP I"LL PUT CHROME PIECES TO YA DOME AND ILL WATCH YOU TAKE A NAP

I GOT A SCOPE ON MY SHIT
MAKE YOU FALL FROM A DISTANCE
IM THE 2 DOUBLE 0hh 4 CHAMP LIKE THE DETROIT PISTONS

I GOT MORE THAN 1 HUSTLE I RAP AND SELL DOPE
I GOT ICE AROUND MY NECK THAT COULD FREZZE MY THROAT

IM A CRAZY LIL NIGGA AND I PULL MY CLIP FAST
AND I TURN SO MUCH HEADS THAT IM GIVING OUT WHIP LASH

IM NICE AT WHAT I DO CUZ I RHYME WAY MORE
AND I PUTY MORE NIGGAS IN THE GRAVE THAN THE VIETNAM WAR


HOLLA AT ME

*_1LUV_*
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do u think u can really win...thats the question im askin ya/
cuz my spits come our quicka and sicka then kids from africa/
this worse then a gay bashin the way this kids been beatin/
u would prolly be safer at a kkk meetin/
u better scream rape cuz im leaven ya ass bleedin/
u shoulda let me spit first cuz that woulda been ya last feedin/
after this shyt u gunna run and cry to someone/
cuz u an unwanted itch like crabs that sneak in when ya fly is undun/
and do u think u really gunna win a crowd wit that shyt u spit/
i got people under a spell im better then sexi...im imaculate/
and incase u aint kno what that word is it means perfect/
ur a waste of life and my time basically kid u jus aint worth it/

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WOOOOWEEE! Insane you did great in this battle. I loved your punchlines! Keep up the good work!
Overall: 8/10

The One: I wasn't feelin' ya flow. I'm sorry. Most of your lyrics didn't rhyme in the first place. So work on your vocab!
Overall: 6/10

ok ok uppin for some more voters.......................................

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Pretty decent battle, The one threw me off a couple times with the bars. Cause one had 3 lines then the next one had 2 lines...then back to 3 lines but it never went back to 2 lines. So im not sure what was going on there, the flow of them was completely off...lines were streched and stuff. insane16 your flow and structure were nice, i could read your shit and understand it a lot better.

Metas a few nice ones from insane16, nothing spectacular..but decent. Nothing in the point from the one.

No real use of multies from either of you two.

I didnt think either of you opened, or closed your battles very well.

insane16 had harder punches, better flow and structure.

v/insane16

hot verse insane
i got to give it to you there
but i ain't giv'n up after al the votes r in do you wanna go again?

thank u 4 explaining ya votes fellas
now i no where to work



*_1LUV_*

I agree wit da otha fellas and wat they said About yo line bars the 1
yo flow was ok but ur structure was messed up
Your rap was pretty good it was just to hard to comprehend
It was a nice verse overall
7/10

Insane yo shit was off the chain
Yo flow was good and were punches were to
the only thing I didnt get from u was multis
Great verse
9/10

v/Insane16

the one if u wanna rematch then jus set it up when this is over with the same rules............uppin for votes.......

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insaine got this battle wid out a doubt structure was tight the flow was good n the punches hit a lot harder than the punches frum the 1,

the 1 - wasnt that wack but the structure was wack, it flowed ok but didnt match the verse frum insaine

v - insaine

insaine noic flow and good punches