on some emotional shit....


as i lay me down to dream
i pray i keep my self-esteam
before i fall asleep to wake
i hope you forgive all my mistakes
without you lord im sure to break
you give so much yet do not take
you were my dad when my father wasent there
when i almost died your miracle kept me here
we've come along way in this walk together
even when im distant your there forever
and ill admit my lifes been hard
but you were always there with angels at guard
through all the struggle you kept me confident
and i still am to this day that I repent
im sin staned but you wash me clean
in jesus name im ready to dream

this was nice man,kind of an inspirational type piece.. it sounds like a prayer or a
song, its hot, i liked ur flow and rhymes too.......keep this shit up, i'll be lookin out for more in the future......

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*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*

damn kidd...dat was a nice drop ya i agree it did kina have a prayer type feel to it...it flowed nice 2...very nice drop...be on da look out fa more from ya kidd...peace

thanks for all the positive words.. ima see if i cant find some of yall shit.. anymore feedback would be ill

im in need of votes on a text battle, so if your feelin this piece maybe go vote on this otha shit.. even if your feelin his more..
vs illmatic d

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damn pretty dope drop.. had some nice feelin... good emotion's

nice drop

please hit up on of my open mics

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