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black pantha 5 83.33%
HellRaZoR 1 16.67%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 07-06-04, 03:54 PM   #1
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HellRaZoR vs black pantha

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Old 07-06-04, 04:36 PM   #2
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Nigga Ill make it a mission to kill yo ass like on "Free Willy,
wanna battle me, u silly homie u dont know me really//
This nigga dont know what its like to be in a set,
His punk ass cant spit on da streetz so he do it on the internet//
This bitch some shit, he sick and tired of loosin,
If me and him fight, bullets gon be flyin and this pussy gon be sewin//
Bitch u should know I take no prisoners Imma kill this man,
Or else Ill leave you half steppin wit a cane in ya left hand//
Yo da best rappers spit first, and all that bullshit second,
Fuck all yall that dont believe it, Cheers to who respect it//
This bitch cryin over me fyin his ass, what a sob,
Ill be shootin and leave u full of holes like Spongebob//
 
Old 07-06-04, 04:40 PM   #3
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yo yo nice, black pantha got that shit heatin.....
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Old 07-06-04, 05:09 PM   #4
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what u talkin bout fool this aint sum movie for kids
try sumthin else if u wanna kill me next time u spit
hold the fuck up why lookin so though u aint hardcore
i'll fuck u up with 1 shot & drop yo body in the harbor
mayb u got the chance to meet spongebob on the bottom
black pantha u aint nuthin for a killa & im bout to bust some
can't u get pussy in yo hood , that why u lookin for a bitch on the net
u betta watch yo back , u better start fight in sum cartoon, now u gotta go to bed
i aint got time to waste my fuckin time on u just sum new fake
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Old 07-06-04, 05:29 PM   #5
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yo i think hellrazor got this 1....
punches were
structure : so so (but betta than mine i guess)
rhymes were good too...

vote : hellrazor....
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Old 07-06-04, 06:17 PM   #6
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Yo that stuff aint count
XxXTASY THAT WASNT NO FULL EXPLAINED VOTE
YOU SUPPOSED TO EXPLAIN BOTH MC'S PROBLEMS
You just said that dude won wit out explainin wat i did wrong
thats that hate vote stuff

Anyway u know I really won dis
 
Old 07-06-04, 09:04 PM   #7
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Uppin for votes..................
help a brother out
 
Old 07-06-04, 09:24 PM   #8
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come on now..........
plz
 
Old 07-06-04, 09:48 PM   #9
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uppin...................
 
Old 07-06-04, 09:55 PM   #10
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Black Pantha
structure was good...ur flow was pretty stable...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

HellRaZoR
structure was wack...it started off good, but then started to come with stretched lines...flow fell off cause of the change in structure...u had a few metas...wordplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a few metas...neither had good personals...black pantha had the better structure and a more stable flow...he also had better wordplay, as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...black pantha gets my vote...

VOTE - BLACK PANTHA

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Old 07-06-04, 09:55 PM   #11
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Not a bad battle, I think Black Pantha was a lot harder though. He was good with the flow, structure was decent...had a few nice metas. Opened the battle up very well I liked that, cause he really dont know you lol. Try some more metas, and personals, and throw a couple extra multis in there, and the flow will be a lot better. (not that it wasnt nice)

Black Pantha you were feedin off his verse, with the sponge bob comment and ya still couldnt throw hard punches. Your structure was straight then at the end it went to hell and was gettin all streched out. No real creativity with the rhymes, they were pretty basic. Need to elevate and come HARDER next time. No real personals, metas, or multis.

v/ Black Pantha
 
Old 07-07-04, 05:15 PM   #12
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hellrazor u jus got wokred kid......black pantha one this easy.....it was a weak battle but black panthas punches hit harder and hellrazor fed off the sponge bob thing(which was gay) both yall need to elevate.....returh the favor in the links in my sig....
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Old 07-07-04, 05:58 PM   #13
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Thanx I got yall
still uppin.....................
 
Old 07-07-04, 10:17 PM   #14
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uppin......................
plz
 
Old 07-07-04, 10:23 PM   #15
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Black Pantha: ok......................lets see...... I think you had a pretty
good flow......syllable was there aswell (nicely done)......punches were
decent they connected well in my eyes...wordplay decent............
originality/creativity was ok....

HellRaZoR: well hmm lets see.................flow was nothing special aswell
as the syllable count they weren't done well (did you read over your drop?)
punches some were good...........wordplay was ok...........................
originality/creativity was ok aswell I have to say

vote: BP

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