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OKay, thats cool. I got the rules, do you wanna spit first or me

oh just go on and spit
i've be doing this for 15 mins I'll be done in 5

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this kid's seriously read for a death-wish another merking for him~
you hot? punk couldn't sweat me........if we battled in a gym!~
you be losing to me now ........just because I get more votes~
u can't spit boy you choking.....and my hands ain't near your throat!~
mr.good bar? you mistaking for chocolate instead of spitting hot bars!~
fake thug you couldn't shine.......if you was classified as a star!~
lil pussy I'm going easy on you so you won't whine like baby child~
your rhymez couldn't be hot.....even if with you my words compiled!~
you trying to play your cards right......I guess you be the shuffler~
when you drop no one makes a noise.......just like a fuckin' muffler~


*in case anyone didn't know a muffler is:
a tubular acoustic device inserted in the exhaust
system that is designed to reduce noise

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alright, next tiem I post, you'll see the bars, almost done with mine anyway

For$aken's mistaken thinkin he's taken this over-all victory/
Your the detective breaking, Mister Goodbar's the unsolved mystery/
My 'initials' make "'em" get the "Gee-Bee's"/ (Mr. Goodbar)
He rocks the "$" symbol in his name cuz it's the only dollar bills he sees/
I'm the ventriloquist, my pen is the illiest, diss you without moving my mouth puppet
I push you down a flight a steps, then kick you back up-it/
set fire to your house and board it from the inside out so you cant jump out/
Your girl loves Mr. Goodbar.....my nuts are in her mouth./
I open the flood gates, it no use, you can't stop my flow/
You say Im a fake thug, but your graffiti was made in Paint Shop Pro/
http://img38.exs.cx/img38/6959/forsaken.gif

A pretty decent battle from you two.

I noticed from from the start that Forsaken had the flow down pat, and the structure was pretty nice too. I dont understand all the ...... though, was that cause you had a streched line in the middle? Mr. Goodbar your shit flowed aight when you said it out loud, not too much on the structure though, a few streched lines.

The punches were taken easy by Mr. Goodbar, he was all over the personals. I did like the line from Forsaken about you couldnt sweat me if we battled in a gym lol that was cool. I think Mr. Goodbar came a lot harder here though with the personals. However lay off the your girl cracks, crack the dude your battlin. I think those jokes are so lame just like mom jokes.

A few good metas from both of yall, a slite advantage with Mr. Goodbar here though. Mr goodbar was also usin a few nice multies.

Overall i liked Forsakens opener better, and Mr.goodbar's closer. so it kinda tied there.

Mr. Goodbar was a lil more consistent with it though, and came harder with the punches.

v/Mr. Goodbar

thanks guyz, 'precaite it, I voted on your battles too! Nice one QB! when you battled illiance.

uppin^^^^^^^^^ for some votes yall, say first to 5?

Flow- Mr. Goodbar, the flow of it was booty, the rhyme scheme was on point. Nicely written all the way through.

Personals- Forsaken, you was into it , you was filled wit' animosity nah mean. Ya hits been hard, you been comin at him like you really meant it. I felt the complexity of ya work nah mean

Overall-Mr Goodbar ya flow was cool but you didn't have to many hard hitters, Forsaken ya flow was smooth and the hits were hard so,,,,,,,,,

Vote-Forsaken

upppinnnnn 4 votes............................................. ..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ok that was a quick keystyle not hitting hard anywayz.....................
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Mr Goodbar killed this doo. He had some lines that were hittin Forsaken on lock. Damn Goodbar killed him with his opener and that one line about kicking him back up the stairs. Forsaken had a good flow too but Goodbar took it with his hard hittin punches and personals.

Vote - Goodbar

Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133759

or this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111

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goodbar took this one easy... better punches, harder hitting personals, flow was a bit stretched in some places but dw, structure wasnt bad...

forsaken, you had good flow and structure, word play was aigght... its just you didnt get personal enough.. and personals hit the hardest... you coulda won it..

v/ mr. goodbar

could you return the favour on the battles in my sig..

one

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up close this shit I need more room!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

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