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lilchiofthachi | 0 | 0% | |
Da Jokah | 5 | 100.00% | |
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07-08-04, 05:04 PM | #1 | ||
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(topical)Da Jokah Vs lilchiofthachi
IP:
aight rules is
5 to 30 lines topical battle no bite/recycle no crew/hate/d.r votes explaine votes u spit first topic iz:::Robbin A Bank... due 1o a.m
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07-08-04, 05:16 PM | #2 | ||
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP:
I walkin down i seen this bank it was callin,i thought 2 myself Chi u wannabe ballin/
all i needed was a mask and a gun,and some nikes cuz knew i was gonna have 2 run/ i walk up 2 tha tella and this a stick up,put tha money in tha bag and hold tha shit up/ i got tha money and i dip 2 my crib,but before i got tha i got shot in tha ribs/ tha popo said freeze before i shoot again,when i got 2 jail i beat up tha biggest nigga so now im tha man |
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07-08-04, 05:20 PM | #3 | ||
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP:
tell me wat u think i missed a couple words
3rd line this is a stick up 4th line before i got there jus 2 let yall kno |
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07-08-04, 05:28 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
ayo chek chek
"ayo jokah we got da blueprints fo tha bank" aight mayne lemme see// "here day iz dawg"We Jumppin" yeah nigga..were da semi-be?// "rite here dawg u ready to role" yeah nigga jus let me load up// "i aight dawg theres tha bank" yeah i see it..lets blow-it-up// "but we need tha greens be" ya i kno stupid..jus stay calm// "aight dawg theres tha cashier" ayo freeze bitch..i gotta bomb// "nice dawg let dat bitch have it" yo shorrty shut up this shit aint funny// "sorry b ma fault" no yo..bitch gimme da money// "aight dawg lets blaze on out" haha see dat shorrty i mobbed tha skank// yaya dawg we got da billz" haha see dat shorrty i just robben tha bank// "no doubt nigga we killed" no we rich niggas rollin on twenty-fo'z// "Ye Ye I kno" no how much niggas u kno got twenty ho'z// e.z nigga wun...
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07-08-04, 05:29 PM | #5 | ||
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IP:
aight tha bold writin is ma boi shorrty talkin tha normal is my drop..aight wun
uppin this..
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07-08-04, 05:40 PM | #6 | ||
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP:
i gotta say that was raw i liked how u set that up
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07-08-04, 05:53 PM | #7 | ||
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IP:
thanx mayne..uppin this muh fuckah
dont sleep niggas holla wun
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07-08-04, 05:57 PM | #8 | ||
Peoria where u at.Illinois where u at.
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IP:
a if i elevate a little bit u think Hardwood Class Sikz would let me in
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07-08-04, 05:59 PM | #9 | ||
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IP:
elevate a lot more get better flow and punces then ye..
but other than that UPPIN THIS SHIT..yo get some ppl to vote on this nigga..
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07-08-04, 06:44 PM | #10 | ||
poetically and justifiably sick
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IP:
o.k....
kinda different from most topicals ive seen.... more like an open mic piece original anyway...props ok....no hate but da jokah took this...beta structure and flow his verse had the better vocab and imagery... lil....ur verse rhymed..but jus 2 basic,wasnt all that bad but not good enough... plz can both yall return a vote links in ma sig n if yall got anymore battles open id b happy to hit em up peace |
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07-08-04, 11:19 PM | #11 | ||
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IP:
uppin this muh fuckah
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07-09-04, 12:46 PM | #12 | ||
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IP:
uppin this muh fuckah
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07-09-04, 02:04 PM | #13 | ||
New to RB
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IP:
i think jokah won this b cuz it made sence the otha 1 didnt
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07-10-04, 09:05 PM | #14 | ||
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IP:
iiight uppin this muh fuckah...
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07-11-04, 05:08 AM | #15 | ||
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IP:
uppin this muh fuckah dont sleep niggas
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