Unlimited lines,
No Crew Votes,
No Dr votes,
No hate votes,
Verses Due 12 midnight,
your Topic was fightin in a war If I'm not mistaken,

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Yea I realize i didnt take the orthodox way of takin this topic. but i had to put my spin on it. So if you're like me u would consider this situation a war. I wrote it as if this is whats goin on and goin through the guys mind. I even gave you details on how it started. and the intro isnt my feelings on they murders. we all know Suge had it done.

~Intro~(not a serious flow)
Picture this...
you come in the house drunk, about 2 in the morn,
cut on the tube. the replay of the news is on,
now a cop confessin his squad shot Pac and Chris,
the station right down the block, U here niggaz poppin shit,
see a helicopter fly over your buildin, and a spotlight hit the street,
houses is emptyin out, the Swat posted, ready for beef,
now it's the beggining of the end it's gotta be us or them,
Fuck the Jake, I'ma dismantle they ass and scatter they limbs...
~It's all over now~

~Verse~
I hit the Deck, now I'm reachin under the bed for the box,
that my dad gave me when i was 11, filled wit my first glock,
opened the top, loaded the clip, now the kid's ready for war,
looked like I teleported outsude, didnt even bother to close the door,
scouted my apartment building's empty rooms, saw no sniper in sight,
Started thinking: "Biggie and Pac dead, how I'm gone fight for they life"
Fuck it, it's the principal of the matter, now the cop's starin us down,
a shot fired, but the gun that it came from is no where to be found,
now everybody goin at it, niggaz on both sides is poppin,
but me? I punked up real quick, I started duckin and dodgin,
looked back down the street, it's no way I'll get to the spot,
I either gotta face em head on, or wait for my body to drop,
I see a cop chockin a lil boy, just for the plain fact that he could,
So I pistol whipped his bitch ass, damn that shit felt so good,
now one of his partners doin that "loyalty" thing, so we at a stand off,
He pissed at me, cause Duke nearly knocked his mans off,
after 3 head shots at close range, he still standin, damn this niggaz a tank,
then remembered last time i used it was on April Fools day, forgot to take out the blanks...
~I told ya'll this shit was all over; for me at least~

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see i couldnt drop like that cause i could care less about a real war

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damn this was a tight battle very hard to say but ima have to give this one to shadow...

Forgotten flow
your verse or should i say peice was good but some off it was off... you were as if introducting the topic and telling a story or a imagery peiece .....you had nice flow....lovely imagation ...lovely peice but it was alittle sharp around the edges...you had some nice structure but could have been better if put in the center..
overall nice peice....
overall:8/10

shadow
damn that was a nice peice it..had lovely emotion's ...nice imagery.....and beutiful ..structure..it was all on point just alittle was off but it was enought to beat...forgotten flow... also you had some nice rhyme sequence very good..
overall nice piece as well
overall:9/10

Vote=Shadow
nice battle from both but i really think he took it

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Ok Nice Battle...Feelin Both Check Quick B/D


Opener- I hit the Deck, now I'm reachin under the bed for the box,
that my dad gave me when i was 11, filled wit my first glock,

Pretty Nice 8.6/10

6:00 a.m. and i must lead. my men into the jungle-
"move like the wind general dont get them into trouble"-

Hott Start 9/10

Round Goes To Shadow.....


BestLine-Fuck it, it's the principal of the matter, now the cop's starin us down,
a shot fired, but the gun that it came from is no where to be found,

Best Vocab You used ^^ 8.8/10

i followed him.. cuz i was with my men to the end-
another attack!!
they shot we shot back..it was raining and thunder cracked-

Best Vocab-9./10

Rond Goes 2 Shadow

Closer-

after 3 head shots at close range, he still standin, damn this niggaz a tank,
then remembered last time i used it was on April Fools day, forgot to take out the blanks...

Stretched But 8.6/10

im downknowing this second will be my last-
just then i hear a big blast...
i realize my time has passed-

Not Tha best 8/10

Round 2 Flow

Winner-Shadow

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uppin

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shadow.......won this hands down ........better strcuture,vocab,and the best opener

v/shadow

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The Legacy

Its Only Getting Better

unexplained... plus ur in my crew..^^ strobe take this vote away

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hmm.. i liked this battle alot.. my kidn of topic hehe..

ok.

forgotten: i was feeling it.. even tho the way you were writing it, was a lil wierd.. like i would give a shit about fighting for tupac or biggy lol.. but to each his own hehe.. i was liking the twist.. it was simple, but had a good effect and hit just as hard as a verse filled with vocabulary.. i would say this was over a good solid topical verse.. 8/10.. enjoyed it alot..

shadow:at first i wasent sure about it, but it grew on me *snickers*..after all, after i was done reading it, i was impressed on the imagery that you had in it.. i was there and i saw everything taking place.. this was very detailed and it had a nice flwo to it.. i would have to say i enjoyed this verse better because, it was actually on a war of some sort that made since..

forgotten i enjoyed the verse, but fighting for big and pac isnt exactly a good war to be fighting lol .. big ups to you both for very enticing verses..

My vote will go to shadow..

if you could, return a vote or two to one of my battles in elevated fron lines.. not hard ot spot em, they are like on the front page (my former name was Hoops)

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the big and pac thing is supposed to be big enough to start a war because of all the cotreversy about them noe searchin for they killers

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FF- that shit was good your flow, structure and it was enjoyable It was a good battle between you and shadow but he came harder your whole verse was a bout a 8/10 which was good but not good enuff

Shadow- your verse was just good your whole verse you had vocab and structure and flow it was good you had some good lines in it to you won hands off your overall was a 9/10

Vote : Shadow

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