10-12 lines
you spit first
no time limit
no d/r, crew and hate votes
etc

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A crip just like Bonecollector

iight checkin in ill have my verse in20 minutes iight one

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Im livin proof that tha today ill hustle and walk//
Sew ya lips togethah so no one can hear ya talk//

Give you one second to breath so you can catch ya last breath//
Slice ya neck in front of a mirror so you can wathc ya own death//

See i rap like "Skywalker" yo these folks feelin my force//
"Crashin" this lunatic leathally like sendin "planes of coarse"//(911)

If you worked in a "bakery" you still couldnt "stack bread"//
Writin rhymes wit a "pencil's" tha only time you work wit "lead"//

Lay it to rest ya went wrong bitchslappin me//
Eave ya like AJ from 106 vanished oh so quickly//

iight letha ya turn to spit let tha best emcee wit iight n dont take foevah keyin yo shit fam one

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you can atleast check in fam..............

I'm out to drastically break even more laws than this kid eva knows *
He slobz down gay lyrics more than wen dope, smokes and grows **[/n]
I smoke this bitch because he thought he was actually dope [b]***
Study wat I wrote and look at it clearly then just write some notes
Killin you drastically thats how you’ll remember your death ****
Like a shot to the heart this is ya last moment to take a breath
This is a sincere apology my bad your life was so pitiful
Demonstration blood poured on the alter like a spiritual ritual
Nine lines is all I need to show this bitch aint not so drastic
Wen I go rampant, ya get ya ass kicked, loosin is ya habit

* out.....law.....drastically= his name
** Slobz down= look at his sig
*** Smoke= beat him....dope/drug= he thinks he’s dope
**** Look at his member title

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A crip just like Bonecollector

I'm out to drastically break even more laws than this kid eva knows *
He slobz down gay lyrics more than wen dope, smokes and grows **
I smoke this bitch because he thought he was actually dope ***
Study wat I wrote and look at it clearly then just write some notes
Killin you drastically thats how you’ll remember your death ****
Like a shot to the heart this is ya last moment to take a breath
This is a sincere apology my bad your life was so pitiful
Demonstration blood poured on the alter like a spiritual ritual
Nine lines is all I need to show this bitch aint not so drastic
Wen I go rampant, ya get ya ass kicked, loosin is ya habit

* out.....law.....drastically= his name
** Slobz down= look at his sig
*** Smoke= beat him....dope/drug= he thinks he’s dope
**** Look at his member title

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A crip just like Bonecollector

good verse fam lets get some votes on this shit now

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its was an okay battle but i really think lethal took this one

Drastic Outlaw

Im livin proof that tha today ill hustle and walk//
Sew ya lips togethah so no one can hear ya talk//
first line was wack... second line was pretty decent but could have been better
Give you one second to breath so you can catch ya last breath//
Slice ya neck in front of a mirror so you can wathc ya own death//
nice line it had nice punch..and it hit hard
See i rap like "Skywalker" yo these folks feelin my force//
"Crashin" this lunatic leathally like sendin "planes of coarse"//(911)
decent line one of your best
If you worked in a "bakery" you still couldnt "stack bread"//
Writin rhymes wit a "pencil's" tha only time you work wit "lead"//
decent line but i really wasnt feelin it

Lay it to rest ya went wrong bitchslappin me//
Eave ya like AJ from 106 vanished oh so quickly//

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I'm out to drastically break even more laws than this kid eva knows *
He slobz down gay lyrics more than wen dope, smokes and grows **
Decent line so far.. had a nice punchlines
I smoke this bitch because he thought he was actually dope ***
Study wat I wrote and look at it clearly then just write some notes
it could have been alot better but had a nice rhyme sequence
Killin you drastically thats how you’ll remember your death ****
Like a shot to the heart this is ya last moment to take a breath
lol.. nice shyt one of your best lines
This is a sincere apology my bad your life was so pitiful
Demonstration blood poured on the alter like a spiritual ritual
iight iight another decent line had ..a nice punch in it
Nine lines is all I need to show this bitch aint not so drastic
Wen I go rampant, ya get ya ass kicked, loosin is ya habit
not a very good finisher... could have been alot better

overall this was a very close battle but ima have to give this one to

vote=lethal lunatic

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cool 1-0 uppin for some votes
I will return the favor

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A crip just like Bonecollector

0-1 damn it hahahahahahahaha str8 uppin for votes

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uppin for some votes
will return the favor

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A crip just like Bonecollector

This was a pretty close battle. It was tight in almost all areas.

Both of the flows were on par, I was feelin both of them. I think Drastic's mighta been a bit better when ya said it out loud. Then again Lethal's flow was very tight as well, although his lines seemed to get shorter each line....dunno why.

The punches were both hittin pretty hard. The only thing was the hardest line that Lethal had, im not sure if it was just a coincidence or what. It seemed though that since he spit 30 min later that he was feeding though.

Killin you drastically thats how you’ll remember your death ****
Like a shot to the heart this is ya last moment to take a breath

Drastic had already said something similar to that beforehand.

No multies from either of you

The Metas were both equally impressive, and that was hard to judge. I think it came down to the punches, and I felt that Drastic was hittin a lil harder, other than his opener which was wack.

v/Drastic Outlaw

I'll give this one to drastic outlaw, i just felt his shit more and he had harder punchlines than lethal lunatic.

lethal lunatic dropped some hot shit too but i think drastic took this on by a small measure, my vote goes to drastic

now yall negros return the favor at my own battle.....[url]http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133939[/url

ok lethol took this by his punches he had more lines wit punches than he had flow drastic stayed to basic dawg this aint preschool this is the real world lunatic had more complexcity to his rhyme and it made sence but mostyle punches is what won
v/luna

return tha favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133838