This is my check in the rules are

10 lines
20 mins to spit ones checked in
no crew votes
no haters

good luck you would need it Dipset bitch 1

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The best There is

The best There was

And the best that well ever be

killa cam DIPLOMATS/BLOOD MONEY GANGSTA

Things for a gangsta can never be the same
I try and I try but never lost the pain
and the hurt dog well aways remain untill the sun come out and dry the rain

check it

I dont make death treats but I can promiss you dis nigga
at the end of this battle you will be a stryped nigga (dead)

you won 1 time so you think you are the shit (please)
prepar for a k.o you will be knocked out bitch (hahaha)

one line after a nother hit after hit
you cant take it no more so you are ready to quick

I should shoot your ass up for thinking you gangsta
nigga you anit pac so nigga get poped

now you are 6 feet under and taking in dirt
thats why iam fucking your bitch and putin in work (oh shit)

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The best There is

The best There was

And the best that well ever be

killa cam DIPLOMATS/BLOOD MONEY GANGSTA

Things for a gangsta can never be the same
I try and I try but never lost the pain
and the hurt dog well aways remain untill the sun come out and dry the rain

Okay son, you must be the sixth 'Cam' I've Merked
in fact, take a few minutes.. to Expand your Verse
cuz rhymin' nigga with nigga just Ain't Gonna Fly
you got me flippin' the trigger, it's Aimed at ya Eye
u're claimin 'BMG', well guess what? I 'Brought My Gat'
after the battle u'll be like "wish I Thought like That"
shootin' from behind.. bullets'll Part thru ya Chest
you need to change your sig kid, u're Far from the Best
this your last chance, next I'm Dispersin' Three Slugz
I gave you fair warning.. and beat you Worse than E-Dubz



(his sig says he's the best ever, dubz KO'd him 5-0)


next time watch who ya run yo mouth off too..
good luck dawg..


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and dude, when you set up the battle, did you happen to notice how it says "Put your opponents EXACT name into the top field"? C'mon dawg, now this battle won't count on my record.. Repost it, and post it correctly.. We'll just copy/paste our verses over..

Uppin for votes.. He fucked my name up in the topic, but the mod fixed it in the Poll selection.. Don't sleep folks.. lemme see some honest votes.. and if you need any returned, let me know..

Still no votes.. C'mon folks.. Quit sleepin'.. Drop an honest vote here, I'll return the favor if need be.. Lemme know..

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alright. Strype pretty much laid it on this kid.

To me it seem'd you had his number from start.
I've read his battles before an that nigga nigga thing is so true.

Killa would have had to something very nice to make all the stryp's personal's go away. And quite honeslty . I seen the same basic drop from him again. I gave him advice last time. Didn't take it. No more advice for Cam.

[colo=red]Vote/Strype[/color]

Pretty easily.
Drop an honest vote on the battles in my sig. Thanks.

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^'n for votes..

yo,this was a givaway,lol,that nigga nigga shit is jus so played^^^^i agree...
strype you took all catagories 2 me,i did'nt see 1 punch from killa cam i liked your structure short but it was pretty tight,good personals..
killa cam:sorry dawg but you gotta get a vocab,work on your structure..jus get better.
vote/strype

I dont make death treats but I can promiss you dis nigga
at the end of this battle you will be a stryped nigga (dead)
NAH..WEAK OPENER..U CANT START WIT "NIGGA" ON TWO WORDS IN DA SAME LINES..WHACK 4/10
you won 1 time so you think you are the shit (please)
prepar for a k.o you will be knocked out bitch (hahaha)
NAH..SIMPLISTIC SHIT..ALL CURSES? BAD VOCAB...5/10
one line after a nother hit after hit
you cant take it no more so you are ready to quick
LMAO..YA SHITS DONT MAKE NO SENSE..WHACK 4/10
I should shoot your ass up for thinking you gangsta
nigga you anit pac so nigga get poped
DIDNT FLOW AT ALL..WEAK..WEAK..4/10[/COLOR=RED]
now you are 6 feet under and taking in dirt
thats why iam fucking your bitch and putin in work (oh shit)
[COLOR=RED]LMAO..UR LITTLE PARENTHESES SHIT IS ANNOYIN N' NO..NOT HOT..WHACK 4/10

21/50

Okay son, you must be the sixth 'Cam' I've Merked
in fact, take a few minutes.. to Expand your Verse
WHACK OPENER..WEAK..WAS LOOKIN FOR A HOT PUNCH..5/10
cuz rhymin' nigga with nigga just Ain't Gonna Fly
you got me flippin' the trigger, it's Aimed at ya Eye
JUSS BEIN HOOD..AND THE FIRST LINE WAS TRUE..BUT FED OFF..LOSE POINTS..5/10
u're claimin 'BMG', well guess what? I 'Brought My Gat'
after the battle u'll be like "wish I Thought like That"
NAH MAN..IS KINNA WEAK..POOR VOCAB..5/10
shootin' from behind.. bullets'll Part thru ya Chest
you need to change your sig kid, u're Far from the Best
PERSONAL AT LEAST..EH..NOTTA GREAT 1 THOU..5/10
this your last chance, next I'm Dispersin' Three Slugz
I gave you fair warning.. and beat you Worse than E-Dubz
PERSONAL ONCE AGAIN..BUT NOTTA A GOOD ONE LIKE BEFORE..TYPE WEAK CLOSER..4/10

24/50

VOTE--STRYPE
CAN YALL PLEASE VOTE ON MY CURRENT BATTLE..HERES THE LINK, PLEASE!:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133302

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

please return the favour:"honest votes"
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130025
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134245

yo, Killa Cam was dissapointing, I made the mistake of thinkin he was like KillaCamflow. too bad, Strype merked U quick. His first line made more sence and hit harder then Ur whole verse put together. Killaz whole verse was simplistic and was full of bullshit gangsta pops. U need flows, punches, metaphore or atleast good wordplay to compete kid. Strypes verse was a great closer to this battle, the feeding shit wasnt too kewl but U made up for it wit the versitility ya shit. U was on point and took a few personals at the kids sig and past battles. Nice.

Punches, S
Flow, S
Struct, S
Metas, S
WordPlay, S
Overall, S
Basically, Strype should put an out of order sighn around Killacams kneck, (for real)lol

V/ Strype

vote on atleast one of my battles if U can, Vote honestly please.
Battle..........................score,
Kelo.............................4 to 0.
Bk 2 tha futur...............1 to 1.
.Gunit101.....................0 to 0.
Jaeburnz......................3 to 1.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

ouch, lol.. ^'n for 2 more votes, hopefully..



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Votes please..? Would be appreciated..

strype basically won this battle in every single catagory, he had beter creativity , mtaz, punches wordplay flow and structure

v - strype