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View Poll Results: Who do you think won this battle ?
Mixtape 5 71.43%
Calamity 2 28.57%
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Old 07-09-04, 05:36 PM   #1
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Calamity Vs. Mixtape

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5 bars max.. 80 posts to vote.. 30 minutes to spit after this goes up.. Checking in, good luck, and lets go
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Old 07-09-04, 05:43 PM   #2
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Old 07-09-04, 05:57 PM   #3
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Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
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Old 07-09-04, 06:05 PM   #4
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Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me...............................
...........................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)


..aight uppin for votes..leave links
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Old 07-09-04, 06:07 PM   #5
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Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me........................................
....................................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)

bold fucked up my structure.. ^ peep this one not that other one
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Old 07-09-04, 06:18 PM   #6
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aiight now, mixtape'z verse is better than calamity

i hardly read any blowz on mixtape's verse so lucky u won this cause calamity lookz like this is his 1st battle, and he'z lazy as fuck so y u rhymin' 4??, u ain;t got no blowz in ya shit so u know who i pick

opener, flow, blowz, closer goes 2 mixtape

 
Old 07-09-04, 06:24 PM   #7
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rofl.. get the fuck outa here ryding his dick.. now mixtape even you know that was a dick ryde ROFL... wow.. i should have set up in elevated.. damn herbs..^that hate ass vote aint counting
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Old 07-09-04, 06:26 PM   #8
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hell no... u will not drop sum bullshit.. look below!
Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me...............................
...........................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
^calamity... not bad but...
How about throwin' personals at him not me! save that fa later, nigga...
*Mixtape's the finest nigga i seen on here so far... so you trippin'... my baby dropped in ten and snapped on ya ass... droppin' in 30..

Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
^nice closer... u did good baby
not dickridin' just the truth..
this my crew partner so i can't vote but both drops were nice given the time limit...

holla supportin' Mixtape..
good luck baby*
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Old 07-09-04, 06:30 PM   #9
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lol..^ much love to you miss, its just a battle -_-.. uppin for some honest votes.. and that was swaying lol.. your supposed to vote for you "baby" lol.. ne way man.. nice drop mix.. uppin and leave some links so we can end some threads..
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Old 07-09-04, 06:56 PM   #10
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Just 2 Ill dont know that kid plus ....80 posts to vote people so vote people..leave a link...
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Old 07-09-04, 09:50 PM   #11
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yo if you need 80 votez to vote then I cant but I think Mixtape took it because every bar was a good punch, I only saw one from Calamity and that was the "pink flames" line, nice but I cant vote so...
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Old 07-09-04, 11:39 PM   #12
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Uppin......Vote people.....80 posts to vote......Leave a Link.....
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Old 07-10-04, 12:12 AM   #13
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mixtape:

Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
^^1st line good multi 2nd line weak 5/10
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
^^it was a good set up but it ended up weak 3/10
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
^^good try at multies but they werent hott 6/10
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
^^bar was foced and decent not a hott punch and stretched 4/10
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
^^your best bar and it was filler 7/10

overall : 25/50 (50%)

calamity:


Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me........................................
....................................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
^^2 good personals hottest bar in battle 9/10
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
^^lol good meta 7/10
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
^^kinda weak 4/10
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
^^good personal weak punch 5/10

overall : 25/40 (63%)

vote: calamity

mixtape i have seen you come way hotter your verse was your worst ever...dont start getting weak use better punches more personals and multies better wordplay and fix your structure a lil

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Old 07-10-04, 12:28 AM   #14
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Don't u know that i never die, it's what all scripts need and rely...
Without me u ain't got nothing like a Non Vet guy with no hearts on supply...
damn that was a pretty hot opener
Slowly twisting ya de-feet in to place, soon after i'll deface...
Cause after i'm through amputating ya features,you'll never be able to show face...
hot... but it could have been better toward the end ... but decent
Slamming the point of an axe in the facts that his skills is just an act...
Ya highly over rated like a weak .8 twenty five dollar sac...
lol...nice multies...
Fuck u, fuck this battling, ya just anotha washed up WANNABE VET trying to revive ya rhyming...
Ya climbing opposite of my skys designing crying cause u missed the 1 time only wack rapper signing...
iight decent line... but the structure was off
I'm sick to my stomach and I'll win cuz I vomit late...
See you thought you could run shit but I came here to dominate...
pretty good closer.... but seen alot better from you but overall i think you took this

Calamity
Mixtapes are played,matter of fact I got some under my couch..
theres nothin you can say to me........................................
....................................you lost to someone stuck ina box..
damn nice ass opener...
missfiyas man?............now i see with ugly guys she is cumfy..
til i dis-arm n de-feat you,like you stole in foreign countries..
decent line
you not hot,so stop using pink to describe heat on ya name..
maybe its a habbit, cause you know gays drawn to flames..
good personal but not really feelin it
just needed a win, so i accepted what you tryn to make happin..
like ya avy all i need was 2 less than this last one..(9-2=7 lines)
weak closer...


structure:Calamity
punchlines:mix
personals:calamity
multies:mix
enjoy:both
flow:mix

overall vote mixtape but i very close battle
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Old 07-10-04, 11:10 AM   #15
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uppin this battle..leave some links
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