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Old 07-10-04, 11:29 AM   #1
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fuck the cops

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with the crime i've committed i don't no the difference between a cell or home//
and these fucking cops got me roaming more than cellular phone//
cause life ain't good when you looking at it through bars//
so i have to hide away and they no the lisence plates so i got to change cars//
i've been in the slammer for two years, it seems like stealing is a crime//
cops better watch out cause i already did my time//
and i out now and ready to take my revange on them fucking pigs//
after i'm done with them they gonna need to get soed up like wigs//
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Old 07-10-04, 12:58 PM   #2
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ayo boy you got that shit it was pretty good um nice lines were ok i hate the cops too. was you really in the slammer? ayo we should team up on a battle or crew or sumthing. you got the sniper and i got the ak. we'll get all the cops
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Old 07-10-04, 01:34 PM   #3
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eh I wasnt feelin it that much but it was iight escpecially the first lines I didnt like that last two lines but it was an average of 7/10 to me which is pretty good

Good shit but you shouldv'e made it betta

nice shit all I have to say
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Old 07-10-04, 01:36 PM   #4
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I put need to improve but ok cuz it shouldve been betta
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Old 07-10-04, 01:37 PM   #5
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ayo y do we have the same ip's? just wondering oh maybe cause you put me as your referral. what ever
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Old 07-12-04, 07:22 PM   #6
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haha not bad yo i wasnt feelin it alot but yea fuk the cops too haha
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Old 12-30-04, 03:31 AM   #7
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my first rap ever so i'm upping it
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Old 12-30-04, 05:26 AM   #8
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i feel you,fuck the cop's.

thi sdrop is ok, nice flow even bar's.could of gone a bit more indepth with it which also would of made it a longer/better length.
6/10
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