10 Lines
No Dickride/hate/Crew Votes
3-0 KO
Due 1 hour after Check In

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Check In
I Wouldnt mind something to eat so i'll drop in about 40 mins

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checkin in

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Why'd this kid call me out? In my Thread i asked for Vets,
Instead i got a 15 year old kid...
...Who hasnt even fully developed yet!!
Kid belongs in School, needs to Learn to Respect his Elders,
I'd strap a jet Engine to his Back...
...But the deadweight wouldnt propel ya!!
if he's Forgotten Flow, his lack of talent will be remembered,
Him and dopeness is an oxymoron...
...Kinda Like hot Weather in December!!
15 Year olds shouldnt rap, Just stick to their Playstations,
But Im still ahead of Your game...
... Just try Finishing your education!!
I'll Close this battle, Flow should rethink His vet Position,
Even if i gave him personal bombs...
... He wouldnt use them as Ammunition!!

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me a noob? Not a chance

nigga thinks he's hot cause he can spit a few bars and he beat datruth,
I dont give a fuck how good u is, I'll beat the herb into you,
see he likes to spell out peoples names and the voters think that shit's wild,
but all he really did was inovate a new way of bitin my style
I normally dont battle Dumb niggaz, but my record needs to be movin forwards,
and I called you a dumb nigga, cause fuck you, pay me is four words,
nigga throws no punches, he depends entirely on his dick riders,
almost died drinkin gasoline, cause he though it would help him spit fire,
Somebody toss me an air freshener, because the stank has got to go,
so you can say I live by five words: Fuck You, Pay Me Hoe...
~Yung Duke~

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I hope you dont mind, Fuck 40 minutes, we spittin in 20 round here

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and dont be feedin nigga

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Yo,i Aint Votin But,wats With That Oxtmoron Shit,ya Used That In The Other Battle,n Stank You Came Alot Weaker In This,but Nice Drop By Both....

What so i can't use the same words in a battle now?
Oxymoron: Defining two images that collide or do not fit together

And it was a quick 10 min key as im busy writing other shit

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uppin

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uppin

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structure - tie (both wack,but stank topped dat wackness)
flow - f.f
metaz - ?
punches - f.f ( both weak as hell)
wordplay - f.f (neither had good wordplay)
creativity -
opener - tie ( i cant decide between both wack openers)
closer - f.f

vote = forgotten flow

drop a vote on this link.....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062

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Can we get some real votes up in here now plz
Uppin x2

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Aight well i wasnt feelin dis shit 2 much but heres my vote

opener:forgotten(it was weak but not as weak as his)
closer:fogotten
structure:stank
flow:tie cuz neither was tight
vocab:stank
rhymes:forgotten(stank sum of ur lines aint rhyme)
punches:forgotten
Overall:forgotten

drop n honest vote on my battles thanx

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