aight 16 lines max

u spittin first.

house rules besides that

lets go

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ya sig sound stupid, u should kno God made earth//
beats are all around us; in nature, b4 mans birth//
it's his turf, but as long as I'm living it's occupied//
why try, can't even see me while I'm passin by//
a fractioned size, u'll need five of u to beat me//
so teensy, u'll be history like B.C.//
come see me, and it'll be the last thing u see//
like Ray Charles when he hit fourteen//
may he rest in peace, but not u, I'll torture u//
u scared tryna escape like yung orphans do//
and who are u, a one-man-band wit no stand//
u need a crew, lyrical rapsody had to take ya hand//
we got a plan, so if u gon' spit then spit right//
this is all fun fo me, but ya bars betta be tight//

aight fam, lets see wat u got... spit sumthing hot fo these niggas

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Lyrical Rapsody

yo, ima rip ya to pieces, check it, im demotin-this-gay..
fuck the shit in between.. ya closer was wack and ya intro-was-played..
im roastin-this-lame.. I can tell ya skills aint been really-addressed..
so ima just say that you suck.. ya verse is revealin-the-rest..

physical pain is typical man.. what you expect when my connection-inflicts..
fuck deservin, ive yet to see any props dropped in the direction-you-sit..
get chopped inta sections-n-bits, every part of you needs counsellin-kid..
I dont accept homos, so im out-on-this-shit, quit bouncin-on-dicks..

I rock cats pronouncin-n-shit, ya raps "cheesy" so im "kraftin"-this-newbie..
I was an mc who saw 8-mile, but this kid started rappin after-the-move..
Man i can spit audios, not you though, so put the talk about mics-away..
I drop by the net to chill... but shit youre here at least twice-a-day..

you cant kill me.. if you wanna punch, try puttin some truth-in-ya-jabs..
the rate you at, youll still be txtin, when im rockin at the booth-n-the-labs..
Fuckin bozo, with all the bitches i beat its clear which clown-is-the-worst..
I just wont mention ya name, cos wackness aint allowed-in-my-verse..

... that hot enough? was this like my initiation battle??lol

one.

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I had to read this one twice because of the fact that both had their own elements to them. Hard to judge but i give this one to One-Man.... only because of the fact his was complex but if flowed easily and he came a lil harder

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Bdddddat lame cats get hit the fuck up so if you wanna talk get the fuck up and breathe easy.

I guess kinda like that... but thas hot, feelin it.... big ups, let's do this

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Lyrical Rapsody

Will Nova-Your verse could have been better I felt.You didn't have too many punches to me.Your punches were weak and I know you could have came better than that.I think you need to work on ya flow more and also try to start adding some mulites to make your verse better.But you should have came with stronger punches then what you had.

One Man Band-I really liked your verse.It was a nice verse all around.You had a very good opener.Your punched were on point.You had great structure and flow.Keep it up.

Vote=One-Man-Band

Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!!

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WILLNOVA:i dint like your punches thought they were weak,your flow was a bit off,your verse jus dint seem like a battle verse,was'nt feelin it at all,sorry dawg..
ONE-MAN-BAND:your verse was tight the whole way through,nice closer,flow n structure was good,liked your wordplay,overall you came alot harder...
VOTE/1-MAN-BAND
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134418

One man = flow was on point for the most part, structure was okay you could of done better on that,wordplay was decent, good punches,didn't see many personals tho,which would of been better, meta's were iight,you had enough to take this battle.

Willnova = you were off topic for some of the lines,maybe fillers, you didnt have many punches, or personals, none of them hit hard, not much meta's not much wordplay,elevate and come wit more punches n shizznit like that..

vote = onemanband

hit up one of my battle wit honest vote

no real competition here.. willnova, your problems started off with your opener, it wasnt a diss.. and it was real kindergarten... your second bar was just self glorification, 3rd bar didnt finish with enough syllables, same prob with bar 4... look i could go on.. but i dont think i need 2, (weak closer aswell)

ok, you can rhyme, dont get me wrong, but u really need to elevate on your battle rhyming skills.................

one man band took this easily.. only thing i can really say to him is that he shouldnt be battling newbs like that... and ya closer was a bit weak... but other then that it was a fairly decent verse.

votes going 2 one-man-band.....

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i'll vote on this........if you vote on this

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=134848 vote on this first

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my vote goes to one-man-band he got this one won and he had good structures and metah and perfect punch line aight peace out y'all
v one man band
vote for this one
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1410222