(oh a tip for spiting my verse when you read it: spit it slow)
Sniper:
i been wanting to kill this nigga and todays the day//
i'm with my gun waiting on the roof tops for my prey//
im sniffin the dope and got my eye on the scope//
in the past i've never missed but you can still hope//
i live my life and do shit ilegal on the roof top//
and i can kill a nigga in public cause cats just look around like who shot//
i see my target getting out his 40,000 dollar car//
but i'll have it and his life by the end of this bar//
he got 30 seconds to make it to the door alive//
but that enough time for me to put in five (bullets)//
a bullet proof vest ain't gonna help you when i'm aim for you dome//
in a litaral sence this bullet will send you home//
the nigga walking slow cause he no it time for him to die//(BOOM)
the bullet came the same time his family open the door and just started to cry//
but i felt no emontions i just pack my shit and left, off to the next roof tops//
love been a sniper cause you never seen by the cops//

(first line is spit slow the rest is fast)
chorus:
i'm waiting. i'm waiting for you. i'm waiting for you to come home//
cause that when death happens with one to the dome//
it like i was born and rasied on the roof tops//
they were a place for me to hid from the cops//
chorus

(med flow speed)
A.K.A.:
when cats run from the car and the sniper can't get em, i do//
i hide at the back door and when the cat comes though//
the atuomatic fill them with 20 with one pull of the trigga//
shot fired and body parts flyng and there goes their figua//
this gun has cause more death then it has empty shells//
in the shadows is where this dawg and his toy dwells//
the automatic makes the best sound and it awesome when cats hit the ground//
the cops might see the bullet shells and the bodys but the killah is never found//
oh no empty clip, the cops seen me, now i'm running//
going through the street and i got hit i thought i was done in//
the pain is going through my blood i feel like i'm dead//
look behide and their face down with a bullet in the head//
look up at the roof top and and see a sniper with smoke coming out of the nozzel//
so i walk out with blood streaming and let the cop become a fossil//

chorus 4x

damnnnn that shit was tyt yo.Metas and multis were there man keep it up yall

thanks ayo i what to hear some of your shit drop some links

ayo that ain't the chorus we discussed this one sucks your verse is good though i fucked up the begining of mine though, but the end was good i think. we should spit it cause it would be a hit lol.

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ayo niggas and niggets lets get some fucking feed back please. as for the chorus i lost the other one so i just made a new one. but i though your verse was all good not just the end but it was definally better.

even though that nigga a.k.a. is not ma FAVORITE rapper if u no wat i mean,that was ill yall i saw yall talkin in some forum i think itr was snipers battle and aka said lets do a colab but i didnt no it was gonna be this soon, good job yall

thanks nigga and me and A.K.A. wasn't doing nothing and both online so i was like let just do this rap shit now. what up with you and him though? what ever. lets get more feed back

ayo i really enjoyed this.. hot drop man.. just work on the hook a bit.. and i dont like tha pace change.. other than that reall hot drop man good job for a rook.. get at me some tiem.. i give this a 8/10

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well it ain't my fault the chorus sucked but thanks any way and me you and sniper should do a collab. upping for feed back

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A.K.A. thanks for the sig and i'm sorry that the chorus sucks butif you don't like it edit it and make one yourself then you'll see how hard it is.

ayo holmes, u guyz had alot of 1 sylable rymez, but i still liked it. did u ever hear neighborhood sniper by eazy-e? u mite like it. i'll give this a 7/10. werd

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hell yeah i heard that shit you hear this is the life of a sniper by young buck that song is fucking awesome: I'ma keep pretending that i don't no that he a fead// and when i get the chance i'ma fullem up with lead// damn.

no mayn, i aint herd that yet, but it sounds dope az hell, werd

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ya'll can still keep tellin me what you think

nice damn drop...good concept...good flow and nice hook. I liked this joint!