Look kid I’m gas and flame make you collapse from strain
Harass your brain ass won’t maintain in this rap game
Best make a supreme attempt and don’t scream as a wimp
Team a bunch of pimps eat your rhymes for lunch like steam shrimp
Too fake and crummy to make money tote a blank cup
So you bankrupt your quotes don’t promote so your rank stuck
Dang you a stinking G go on a drinking spree make you drunk
With this funk, your butt flunk this course too much force in this junk
MISTAH_ TATE I’ll blister your fate

upping for responses

who the fuck are you, and why is it becomin a fad to diss me, who the fuck am i? eminem?

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

yo Mistah you better hope he dont get wit Mjust ad them cause he got a higher vocab than all of ya'll

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^^^ you know i had to put my 2 cent in it. and like i told Mjust, why dont ya'll just battle 3 of them. first tem to 2 victories wins

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Ayo look kid, dont get mad at me cuz yo rhymes lack common sense
you put your sorry shit up in open mic, and i dropped my two cents
now dont cry like a lil bitch and throw a hissy fit
just take it as criticism and elevate yo shit
cuz you see beef wit me always ends in tragedy
so i dont wanna have to make anotha enemy
murda him and then make his whole crew get back at me
cuz truthfully i dont go lookin to stir up controversy
dont judge me fa u know me just cuz u see i'm from the dirty
so get you some tissue and take you a nap
and when you wake up, realise how stupid u was and say "it's just a rap"

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

oh yea and my feed back. nice drop but throw some punches and personals in there next time. that was too bland. i didnt feel as if it were aimed at him. you couldve put anyones name on the title

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Thanks For The Feedback I Think Now I'm Understood Real Good Ha! Ha! Ha! Boy Got Ripped

nigga who got ripped? not me, i know i aint the only person who thinks your shit doesnt make any sense at all. i understand you was talkin about gas, but you had no aim at all, dont bitch and throw disses at people just because they give you honest feedback

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

made my point that shows you do understand my shit so I dusted your ass for that remember the mighty MADDRAPPER will get you kid HA! HA! HA!

stop being so sensitive dawg, and dont post shit if you dont want honest feedback, i'm tired of yall niggas cryin

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck