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Old 07-15-04, 01:57 AM   #1
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DON(mos.) <VS> LEGACY(c.s.)

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due tomoro by 9 pm eastern time
no bull
topic:hope
legacy dont fight it jus this is a fine topic aight and were good friends so dont mess it up by arguing about the topic aight drop by the due time good luck pc
 
Old 07-15-04, 09:36 AM   #2
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yea this crew battle is rollin....ahhh uppin for legacy to check in..
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Old 07-15-04, 04:09 PM   #3
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~HOPE~

~hopes just a word but i dont have it~
~with the life i lead its like a could unable to grab it~
~a full house family no food to eat~
~stampin our feet the only way we obtain heat~
~but yet i attend church to recieve a blessin~
~only later that day to find my moneys lessended~
~come christmas my children neva heard of prancer~
~no money its all spent fightin my sons cancer~
~no tv jus silence through the third story~
~come home at nine wit no food left for me~
~and yet i pray my only vent of hope~
~second job stuck to sellin dope~
~all these troubles yet no solutions~
~my life is earth and im the pollution~
~jus when i thought it was all wrong it turned~
~we won a lottery all the things i yearned~
~theyre in reach now the moneys there~
~my wife warned me this would happen but i didnt care~
~i lost my faith the last thing i had~
~the one thing i last learned from dad~
~well look at him i said~
~he died wit no money poor and cold in bed~
~he left my mother with nothing~
~but now i got my chance were finally something~
~fuck hope i had it all life and whered it get me~
~i prayed enough now look wat he sent me~
~millions in cash now theres no need~
~she tried tellin me im speakin greed~
~yeah ok well fuck you then i neva need you~
~i work all day to come home and neva see you~
~where have you been and what you done~
~all you did was add to the struggle so it weighed a ton~
~id deal wit 2 bosses then to hear you yellin~
~how the fuck do i control how much drugs theyre sellin~
~i only get paid wat i earn and its not much~
~but now i got it all well neva be stuck~
~so i left i was done talkin~
~i had to cash in the ticket so i began walkin~
~over to the shop rite and walk up to the counter~
~handed the ticket this time hope hit me a grounder~
~im sorry sir not a winner but try again~
~hope is the last thing left for men~
 
Old 07-15-04, 11:58 PM   #4
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uppin for him to drop hsi verse on here...........
 
Old 07-16-04, 12:52 PM   #5
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sorry i just got back from my friends house i'll drop later pc
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Old 07-17-04, 12:02 AM   #6
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you really gotta have alot hope in my type of situation~
got no money baby on tha way from intercourse penatration~
thought it was all good till tha baby come early time he needs more~
they tellin me i might not ever be able to hold him cause he's premature~
and he might die a tear trickels down my eye they tell me to come back later
but i cant leave my kid while all that's given him life is this resperator~
but it's not just cause he's premature they told me bold an plain~
that they have just found a rapidly growing tumor in his lil brain~
and they couldnt do tha surgery cause i couldnt afford these medical bills~
i had to keep him alive but i'm calm as inside outrageous tention builds~
as i get to tha parkin lot and to my house i abruptly start to run~
only 1 way for this surgery to happen and a crushal key to that is my gun~
as i get tha clip's i think of my baby and my heart like tha titanic it sank~
but i had to do what i gotta do so i sucked it up and walked in tha local bank
a silent hush went around then i shot 2 in tha roof and said everybody down
not knowin tha clerk soundin the alarm i heard tha cops sirens comen in town
the clerk said WANT DO U WANT i said put the money in this sack~
it was in their the cop's were their so i ran out tha door into tha back~
of the alley with hope that he would survive then i feel a burning sensation~
enter my chest i was hit i shoot back in a panic no time for hesitation~
i get in my car and tell my wife i'm on my way then she says tha baby is fine
i tell her i love her and tha baby cause i'm gaspin for breath loosen time~
then my chest got real heavy like someone stabed me wit a big knife~
i guess it's tru what they say death brings anutha life..................
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Old 07-17-04, 01:00 AM   #7
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uppin for votes aight thanks pc...................
 
Old 07-17-04, 03:36 PM   #8
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uppin for soem votes..............................
 
Old 07-17-04, 07:48 PM   #9
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uppin.............................................
 
Old 07-18-04, 03:05 AM   #10
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uppin.............................................
 
Old 07-18-04, 11:49 AM   #11
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lets go uppin this shit..c'mon..lets gte this poppin..
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Old 07-18-04, 05:38 PM   #12
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uppin.............................................
 
Old 07-18-04, 11:15 PM   #13
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uppin.............................................
 
Old 07-19-04, 03:51 PM   #14
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uppin.............................................
 
Old 07-19-04, 08:57 PM   #15
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woooo...Seriously and honestly pretty good Vocab but Not much Multies
but you had some Nice structure leaving good flow and Stuff and More
imageny

Don..you Was good To But Slipped in some parts of the Flow
and Vocabl..Yours was pretty Focused Legacy takes it because yours was
more orginial then his

v/Legacy

Legacy-Nice Drop you had some pretty good
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