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Old 07-15-04, 03:37 PM   #1
DON
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TOPICAL DON(mos.) <VS> PoEtIc JuStIcE(d2r)

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aight 40-50 lines
no bull
regular house rules
topic:tragedy
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Old 07-15-04, 11:54 PM   #2
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~TRAGEDY~
~so many times we can apply the word tragedy~
~like if an Iraqi kills a girls daddy~
~or when a man decides to bomb up a crowd~
~or that drugs and guns are even allowed~
~if a little black baby gets shot by a stray~
~you wont catch it on news all fuckin day~
~cause nobody cares bout the minorities~
~only time theyre heard is a bump in wit authorities~
~or how the cia knew 9/11 but still kept on letting~
~and yet 2 years later the nations forgetting~
~half this whole countries sucked into depression~
~its sad the biggest story is supersizing's discresion~
~or how obesity is the health clinics biggest concern~
~and now we pop viagra every time that we yearn~
~what about aids or some major disease~
~nah too busy wit flonaz to stop you from sneeze~
~how bout the doctors who wont accept insurance~
~meanwhile their kids wont live on endurance~
~so they refuse to operate if its not for the cash~
~but most of the rich got it hid up and stashed~
~how bout the homeless you pass everyday~
~and the man who refuses and walks by theres no way~
~but the man hes alone and starving from hunger~
~and the nites get so cold hes forced to go under~
~he crawls in a space hidden in sewers~
~and he dies that nite so the mans clothes look newer~
~if only he dropped a quarter into his cup~
~while the poor maned helplesly looked up~
~and he saw the ignorance written on the mans face~
~and so now he preaches to hate the white race~
~so now a black kid he hears the poor man and now he listens~
~he hates and goes back on the covenant when he was chrisened~
~meanwhile in afghanistan a man hits a mine~
~so his squad strops cause the areas lined~
~machine guns open and kill all of these soldiers~
~one was a mother who remembers wat her daughter told her~
~please mom dont leave me i dont want you to die~
~and the 5 year old jus breaks down and she cries~
~2 years later she just recieves the bad news~
~her mothers body was bein shipped home on a cruise~
~so now shes alone no mom to be at her wedding~
~and to her tragedy has sent her life setting~
 
Old 07-16-04, 08:17 PM   #3
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alright thats a rap!!!!! way to take this one home DON
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