yea if you seen me battle before then you'd realize that my open mic style is way different ftom my battke style. this my first open mic in months, drop some feedback. and if it makes a different, I wrote this to a beat.


Ya'll cats better strap up, this is world war three,
it's the boy Yung D., and I'm reppin for BP,
See ya'll be talkin real greasy like ya better than my team,
Broke hustlers, never even seen a triple beam,
listen, you dont want a war,
you dont wanna get cracked by the 4 in the side of ya jaw,
any ice tha you got, I'll be takin it all,
now you pissin me off, I'll put a 5th to ya broad,
if you mention my squad, you'll be sittin wit God,
if you wanna go to war, I'm ignoring the law,
dog, if you got beef then we can end it today,
the type to blow up ya work place like Timmy Mcveigh,
I'm yellin four words,"give me the yay"
the game dirty, but I still love to play,
you dont want it wit my squad,
I'll run up on u late night, clappin at ya thoughts,
leave ya limbs on the curb and ya brain in the car...

(hook)
ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont want a war(ya'll dont want a war wit us)
ya'll dont wanna ride, ya'll dont wanna ride, ya'll dont wanna ride(Yeah, motherfuckers)
ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont want a war(ya'll dont want a war wit us)
ya'll dont wanna ride, ya'll dont wanna ride, ya'll dont wanna ride(BluePrint Nigga)

(Listen ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont wanna ride...)
Put the metal to ya eye, put ya melon on ya wife, I dont care about ya life,
man you aint a gangsta, soft ass nigga I'll get you wit a knife,
be serious, ya squad dont even wanna bust,
war wit BluePrint? ya'll wont kill none of us,
Flow alone would leave ya'll under dust,
ya moms'll wonder what happened to her other son,
grab my other guns if slugs run out my other one...
bang at ya legs have you jumpin like double dutch,
...I wont kill em all, some will run...
but when they see me they shook,
...make em swallow they bubble gum
cause they know i owe em one shot to they lower lungs,
put they coffin low enough, for the devil to open up,
the morgue'll sew em shut... he talks too much...
...see his mouth, couldnt close it shut...

(Yea BluePrint Bitch. shout out to Vango, Daclassic, J Poll, Spul, Atticus, and the vicious Femcee. Introducin the newest members, Durmil and Mixtape. we takin over. BP for life. Holla at ya boy Duke. ~1~)

(hook)
ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont want a war(ya'll dont want a war wit us)
ya'll dont wanna ride, ya'll dont wanna ride, ya'll dont wanna ride(Yeah, motherfuckers)
ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont want a war, ya'll dont want a war(ya'll dont want a war wit us)
ya'll dont wanna ride, ya'll dont wanna ride, ya'll dont wanna ride(BluePrint Nigga)

(hook till fade out)

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I may be editing wit a third verse later

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come on let me get some feedback

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com on

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i thought this the flow was nice, wasnt feelin the hook tho, i couldnt put it together where it matched your two verses, guess u gotta have a beat behind it. showin pride for yo clique, thats tyt. shit strung together well, over all i'm feelin this. u shook the structure up at the end, but that aint a bad thing. good drop. i know who u was talkin to at the end, and what u meant, so its all gravy

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

it was good i liked this song keep up the good work

yea thanks, still uppin for feedback

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uppin for feedback

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nice nice

still uppin for more feedback

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Aaaaaaaaaaah Haaa...
!!!...
Cant Fuck With The Fam, Forreal...
BluePrint Is On To Many Levels Above The Fathamable To Want It...
Flow Was Hott Ta Def Mayn...
Way Up The Hype On B.P...
Respect For That One Playah...
~One~

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^in

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Shit Was Koo Mann Hook Could Of Beenbetter
I Need Some Feedback On My Shitt

Cause Yall Be Scared To Even Enter My Shitt........feedbak Yall

YEA MAN I FEELING YA SONG DAWG
BUT YOU NEED 2 CHANGE DA CHORUS
AND IF YOU ADD DA THIRD VERSE
DAT WILL BE A GREAT SINGLE

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I CANT BE WIT
IF YOU NOT WIT ME YOU AGAINST ME
AND IM READY 4 WAR PEACE
BATTLES DAT NEEDS VOTES

uppin

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