house rules
10-20
no due date if it's longer than a week i'ma close it
i'll go first no feeding
do it in 30 mins

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30 min after check in or am i on tha clock..........................

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

well ill go to the bathroom then ill check in then ill spit after you

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

check in .................................................. .......

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

ill spit shit that so mistkal it make you think im forshaken
and aka ya girl, its like she wearin a sing, bootay fo tha taken
and ill call this my redrum battle or 187
ill turn shit around lik bill clinton afta 9/11
but ill spit rhymes that will have you mentaly destroyed
and know it time to get ma hole arsnale deployed
afta this shit is drop youll be wishen for better days
but bitch you wont see no changes in any ways
cuz bitch my rhyems are that kinda shit that be praised
and your flows are that dirt that no one would evan phase
ill show no mercy to fagget like you
and fine i won't spit shit that will shike you
i may leave a fagget like you in fright
but it a happier place now walk in to tha light
fuck Aka you should BE akuta Also know up tha ass
no back down fagget you aint nuttin but trash
cuz ill tear ya ass ta shreds y'all love that feds
you a big Loser but i got tha slugs fo snitches
cuz you know i run this battle and i don't need switches

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

ma last line i was gona have BIG L in bigger riten but it didn't come out and then you might get it

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you can't get to me cuz
U can't Touch tha Untouchble
Break tha Unbreackable
Shake tha Unshakeable
Move tha Unmovealble

i named my bullet after a computer cause "dude your gettting a dell" (you no the commiceral)//
and just one is gonna open up the the gateway to hell//
this cat call him self xl, but he ain't never gonna excell//
if you try dropping a rap album only two copy's would sell//
only his mama would pay $5 for one and he'd buy one him self//
fuck that, stores would no how bad it was and not put any on the shelf//
Damn dawg how you gonna call youself biggie when your only xl? you like and elf//
even if this cat bite the hottest i'm garanteed to win like battling my self//
you coming from peg city and going back with a peg leg//
if you keep rapping, in a few weeks we see this cat trying to beg//

ok your turn then get votes

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vote biggie

his shit was titer, had betta vocab, and metaphores

aka's was aight, had good flow

but ima have to go wit biggie

and yo vote on mah battle wit darrk or mad skills

holla

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ok battle nottin special

AKA- you had some hard hittin punches my favorite line of yours was the first 4 lines those were the best you had some good personals and good structure
your verse was ok I would give it a 7/10

Xl- ok good to some personals but werak punches you talked about 9/11 which was wack etc etc your verse was kinda weak but at the same time ok
your overall verse was a 5/10

vote: AKA

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AKA - HARD Punches, good structure, and ill vocab... nice

Biggie - Whack punches and bad style alot of shit didnt make sense (EXAMPLE: ill turn shit around lik bill clinton afta 9/11) WTF SHUN...

MY VOTE= AKA

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upping

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AKA: you had some good punches in ya verse, ya flow was good, i especially liked the opener,nice name personals too, overall ya shit was creative and good...
XL:you also had some decent lines and good flow,needed more creativity in lines and personals,,but good
VOTE:AKA

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A.K.A.

i named my bullet after a computer cause "dude your gettting a dell" (you no the commiceral)//
and just one is gonna open up the the gateway to hell//
^worded horribly...but I like the concept...decent

this cat call him self xl, but he ain't never gonna excell//
if you try dropping a rap album only two copy's would sell//
^weak...

only his mama would pay $5 for one and he'd buy one him self//
fuck that, stores would no how bad it was and not put any on the shelf//
^weak...get off this topic and go sumwhere else...

Damn dawg how you gonna call youself biggie when your only xl? you like and elf//
even if this cat bite the hottest i'm garanteed to win like battling my self//
^weak metaphor...

you coming from peg city and going back with a peg leg//
if you keep rapping, in a few weeks we see this cat trying to beg//
^it opened up to somethng decent...then fell off horribly

Biggie_XL:

ill spit shit that so mistkal it make you think im forshaken
and aka ya girl, its like she wearin a sing, bootay fo tha taken
^weak...

and ill call this my redrum battle or 187
ill turn shit around lik bill clinton afta 9/11
^9/11...people needa stop makin punchlines bout that...way too old

but ill spit rhymes that will have you mentaly destroyed
and know it time to get ma hole arsnale deployed
^nope...

afta this shit is drop youll be wishen for better days
but bitch you wont see no changes in any ways
^waitin...

cuz bitch my rhyems are that kinda shit that be praised
and your flows are that dirt that no one would evan phase
^weak...

ill show no mercy to fagget like you
and fine i won't spit shit that will shike you
^weak...

i may leave a fagget like you in fright
but it a happier place now walk in to tha light
^weak...

fuck Aka you should BE akuta Also know up tha ass
no back down fagget you aint nuttin but trash
^weak...

cuz ill tear ya ass ta shreds y'all love that feds
you a big Loser but i got tha slugs fo snitches
cuz you know i run this battle and i don't need switches
^weak...

Overall: A.K.A came with the only decent line in the battle...so that's why my votes goes to A.K.A

Return the favour both of you, and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. I took the time to do this for you, i'm sure you can do it for me. Thank You.

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T West vs. Kizza

good battle aka had better punches so he won

v/aka