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View Poll Results: WHO MORE SKILLED
State CapiTol 5 83.33%
!RIFF RAFF! 1 16.67%
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Old 07-19-04, 11:03 AM   #1
!RIFF RAFF!
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Exclamation !RIFF RAFF! VS State CapiTol

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15/20 Lines Due Tomorrow
Strictly No Crew Votes
No Dick Riding
No Hate Votes
3-0 K.o
4-1 T.k.o
 
Old 07-19-04, 11:23 AM   #2
Decree Wun
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why do tomorrow? you need that long to write 10-20 lines..haha ur fuckin pathetic
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Old 07-19-04, 11:32 AM   #3
!RIFF RAFF!
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no bitch
jus im busy with 2 other battles.
why you gunna go and say somthing like that BITCH
you know my skill.....
 
Old 07-20-04, 10:24 AM   #4
!RIFF RAFF!
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aight checking in
i`ll drop in half hour or asap
if i drop first i want no feeding
 
Old 07-20-04, 10:48 AM   #5
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Exclamation aight ere goes

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VOTERS READ THIS OUT LOUD

Aight ere it is


VERSE OUT LOUDI hate State Capitol I cant stand the irritating bitch.
like how females cant stand when they take a piss.
Hes got 18 wins but it aint down to heavy rhymes.
its because he battled the same retard every time.
set up his crew and recruited me as the first member.
but gave the co leader spot to his boyfreind Ill Temper.
he only arrived here a day before me yes thats right.
yet hes got 1000 more posts geek needs to get a life.
the kid is that ugly he couldnt get laid at a brothal
the only time he'll get laid is when he's laid in his coffin.
now the truth's out........that this fuckin faggot is dyin,
because RBR didn't know you sucked until you started tryin...
I dont need gas build up to crush and break his mind.
your futures carbon dated through 20 adjacent lines.
batting me will make you cry with unrestrained emotions.
You blowing up would be like an unexplained explosion.
wordplay or no wordplay, hes gaining his fourth defeat
This bitch getting pissed on more than his city toilet seats
You just like burnt food, cos youve been over done
should be granted Cats-Eyes to see what a pussy youve become
 
Old 07-20-04, 10:49 AM   #6
!RIFF RAFF!
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ignore the verse out loud in first line
it a mistake
 
Old 07-20-04, 01:30 PM   #7
Decree Wun
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lol......alright check this...you gettin KO'd Son.......i remember when you said i was soo cool and i was real talented..and i had your respect..what happened man? LMFAO.....well...............too late for sorries now you gettin kilt...


Kid Your Wack, Your Talented Is Like Your Sig, You Don't Got Any..
Spit Naepalms, Blow Up your crib, Have you livin in a box, collecting pennies..
Gave You A chance to run, you have the nerve to battle State..
Fuck It ill throw My lines in your face and let my verse choose your fate..
Only way Riff Raff is close to double R is cause he rides Res's Dick..
this is all stones-n-sticks, It's Clear this kid Stays On Cocks, Like ticks..
Your Intelligence is decreasing, only thing expanding is your asshole..
his mom's strict can't come on past 7, but he claims he's on parol..
Acid infested Saliva, Spit in your face, Watch as Riff Raff melts..
Only thing keepin' you from fallin to the bottom, Is your Belt..
deaths-your-fate, Your Jaws are like the Laws, So Easy to break..
Kid Your done for, leave you shook more then southern earthquakes..
Leave you brainless, I Rip more "heads" then Sleepy hollow..
your brain is hollow, Runnin to the top, this kids tryina follow..
But the gates shut half way, cause kid im out of your league..
this the seige, no shirt on but alwayz have somethin up my sleeves..
exclamation marks in your name, but no ones even "heard" of you..
Slice off your lips so i dont hear a Word From you..
Freestyled half this verse, still enuff sickness to leave you in a herse..
Your cursed, never be talented, in this rap game , your the worst



LOL didnt evne try for this kid.......freestyled the whole thang
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Old 07-22-04, 11:45 AM   #8
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Kid Your Wack, Your Talented Is Like Your Sig, You Don't Got Any..
Spit Naepalms, Blow Up your crib, Have you livin in a box, collecting pennies..
decent, not hot
Gave You A chance to run, you have the nerve to battle State..
Fuck It ill throw My lines in your face and let my verse choose your fate..
decent
Only way Riff Raff is close to double R is cause he rides Res's Dick..
this is all stones-n-sticks, It's Clear this kid Stays On Cocks, Like ticks..
decent but simple
Your Intelligence is decreasing, only thing expanding is your asshole..
his mom's strict can't come on past 7, but he claims he's on parol..
personal, i like
Acid infested Saliva, Spit in your face, Watch as Riff Raff melts..
Only thing keepin' you from fallin to the bottom, Is your Belt..
i like
deaths-your-fate, Your Jaws are like the Laws, So Easy to break..
Kid Your done for, leave you shook more then southern earthquakes..
simple
Leave you brainless, I Rip more "heads" then Sleepy hollow..
your brain is hollow, Runnin to the top, this kids tryina follow.
starts good ends simple.
But the gates shut half way, cause kid im out of your league..
this the seige, no shirt on but alwayz have somethin up my sleeves..
heard it before
exclamation marks in your name, but no ones even "heard" of you..
Slice off your lips so i dont hear a Word From you..
heard it before
Freestyled half this verse, still enuff sickness to leave you in a herse..
Your cursed, never be talented, in this rap game , your the worst
wack ending


VERSE OUT LOUDI hate State Capitol I cant stand the irritating bitch.
like how females cant stand when they take a piss.
decent
Hes got 18 wins but it aint down to heavy rhymes.
its because he battled the same retard every time.
funny
set up his crew and recruited me as the first member.
but gave the co leader spot to his boyfreind Ill Temper.
personal
he only arrived here a day before me yes thats right.
yet hes got 1000 more posts geek needs to get a life.
i like this line cause i wonder how so many cats get all those posts so fast
the kid is that ugly he couldnt get laid at a brothal
the only time he'll get laid is when he's laid in his coffin.
decent

now the truth's out........that this fuckin faggot is dyin,
because RBR didn't know you sucked until you started tryin...
i like
I dont need gas build up to crush and break his mind.
your futures carbon dated through 20 adjacent lines.
aiight
batting me will make you cry with unrestrained emotions.
You blowing up would be like an unexplained explosion.
aiight
wordplay or no wordplay, hes gaining his fourth defeat
This bitch getting pissed on more than his city toilet seats
good
You just like burnt food, cos youve been over done
should be granted Cats-Eyes to see what a pussy youve become
hot ending

enough to get my vote: Riff Raff

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Old 07-27-04, 12:47 PM   #9
CounTREE Jay
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Riff Raff had parts of his shit that didn't rhyme (Brothel and Coffin?) and otha than that, wasn't really feelin' his verse at all. State spit decent, not really that good, but enough to beat homeboy.

V/SC

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Old 07-20-04, 04:03 PM   #10
Decree Wun
That's Gangsta
 
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uppin............................................. ....
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Old 07-21-04, 07:22 AM   #11
!RIFF RAFF!
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What Ever Freestyled The Full Thing
Liar
You Were Online When I Dropped Yet You Didnt Drop Till Nearly 3 Hours Later
I Should Have This
But Then Again I'll Probably Still Loose Coz You D'r
 
Old 07-21-04, 10:29 AM   #12
Decree Wun
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i dd/r ay.......i laugh at this kid saying i d/r.....how? fuckin bitch......and i did freestyle it punk...cuz i saw ur verse and i jus laughed..im like...this is gonna be easy so there was no need for me to try..but wat ever punk ass bitch...you jus mad cuz u bout to get KO'd....
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Old 07-21-04, 11:08 AM   #13
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laughs out loud
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uppin
 
Old 07-21-04, 12:20 PM   #14
shadow
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state
your structure wasnt good..it was actually fair..but you had hard hitin punches and pretty nice
personals this was nice work...you had fair flow..but need improvement on harder hitting punches
i felt you came harder then riff raff and won this battle cleanly..
8.3/10


riff raff.
you had decent structure except for the first line..but you got better structure then him..
your pucnehs didnt hit hard..well they hit hard but not hard enought to match to his..
not much persoanls and calling him a dickrider with out proof gets you know where its juss weak
overall 7.4/10

vote state capitol..easy ..pece
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Old 07-22-04, 08:20 AM   #15
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aight5b uppin for some hounest votes
 
 


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